Love like Rain

[Inthemaking]

This is my first official song, played at a gig at my school and the audience seemed to realy like it. Its still not done and id appreciete help with it!

-Doug

Artist: Doug Lobacki
Song: Love like Rain

So cry cry cy
Like you did in the day
Way way back in may
When you felt that way
hey- hey- hey-

Take me home to that warm safe place
Where i can sing my song about
Beuty and grace
You wont feel the pain
Becuase its love like rain

So cry cry cy
Like you did in the day
Way way back in may
When you felt that way
Hey- hey- hey-

Take me home to that warm safe place
Where we can feel good
By the fire place
You wont feel the pain
Becuase its love like rain

Have love under the sky
The Dark Dark Sky
Wed be so close
Well never say bye

So cry cry cy
Like you did in the day
Way way back in may
When you felt that way
Hey- hey- hey-

Take me home to that warm safe place
Where we can start a
Relationship at a slow pace
You wont feel the pain
Becuase its love like rain

[igrec]

The title is awesome I love the rain... You know "water washes the sins always..."
keep it on the line Good job .

[Inthemaking]

thanks it means alot