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Old 01-24-2008, 12:36 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Time To Let Go

all alone in this lonely world, my thoughts of you still dwell
how i miss you on these lonely nights, i swear i'm not doin well
home alone and its hard to think, hard to find somethin to do
tryin to think of different things, but my mind is stuck on you
you had a way to my heart, and you tore it apart, and now its time for me to mend
a lonely drive, with no one by side, when will this sadness end?

<chorus>
cause im lost without you, now where do i go?
where can i find someone close to you
i compare everyone to my first love
i think its about time to let go
its time to let go...

i walk outside and the rain is pouring down, reminds me of nights with you
we danced in the rain, im not enjoying this pain, my life is nothing without you
you had the biggest smile and you could turn heads, everytime that you walked pass
i do admit that i was insecure, oh how i wish i could just take it all back
we lived hand in hand and heart to heart
i never saw us falling apart

<chorus>
cause im lost without you, now where do i go?
where can i find someone close to you
i compare everyone to my first love
i think its about time to let go
time to let go..

<bridge>
morning comes, and you're not by my side
a coldness slowly fills me inside
i wake up each day, hopin that you're there, lying right here next to me
i dream of the day that you come back, and mend my broken heart
help me piece together, what you helped break apart..

<chorus>
cause im lost without you, now where do i go?
where can i find someone close to you
i compare everyone to my first love
i think its about time to let go..
it's time to let go..
i have to let go..
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Old 01-25-2008, 08:43 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I guess they are ok. But I don't like it. Too much clichés. You could try new things to make it more exciting, to use metaphores. I think a lyrics should be more lyrical...
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