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Old 01-26-2008, 12:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default A different corner

You are cheated on in a relationship but you try to convince yourself it’s all ok. However something in the back of ones mind keeps repeating the truth.Everyone knows, nobody shows and the hurt still grows…


I don’t know what to think sometimes
Coming home is such a painful drive
Door opens, you greet picture perfect fine
but I see another none too shy

Telling me with a smile that shines
same old guests are again coming tonight
Guess it’s a sign of the times
when you can play before haunted eyes

What good is violence to me now
what good is silence to me now
What good is turning a different corner today
when I saw what I saw yesterday
Can’t turn back the clock anyhow
what good are you to me now?

Doorbell strikes to hit right on time
Last to know I want to die
I’m getting tired of reading signs
Getting tired just like his wife

What good is silence to me now
what good is violence to me now
What good is turning a different corner today
when I caught what I caught yesterday
Can’t turn back the clock anyhow
what good are you to me now?

I can’t and I don’t
I don’t and I won’t
I won’t and I shan’t
I shan’t because i can’t believe you anymore

What good is violence to me now
what good is silence to me now
What good is turning a different corner today
when I saw what I saw yesterday
Can’t turn back the clock anyhow
what good are you to me now?
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Old 01-27-2008, 11:42 AM   #2 (permalink)
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These lyrics start off so well and they are well written througout however I feel it ends a bit abruptly, I think that possibly more needs adding to it, just to add more closure to it?
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Old 02-16-2008, 05:08 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Have read few of your songs. Really good. Write some more. Get some friends who can play guitar, bass drums. Then check out a record company
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