Working on a song... need comments
Allright here's a quick song I wrote. Not finished yet, but tell me what you think.
Life is a.. *****!!!
kicks us in the side
cooks us all alive
KILLS US ALL!
kicks us in the ***
ruin us so fast
Well I guess that's the way it has to be
Sitting in your room with your agony
well I have something to say
so put down the tissues you whiny *****!
yeah I guess sadness is a part of life
if there was none.. then joy wouldn't seem all that great
if there was no loss, we wouldn't treasure what we have
If anger was lost, we'd never know true kindness
In life there's a duality which must be maintained
And that is the source of all our pain
and the cause of our greif
yet it gives us hope, joy, and love
So put down knife and live it out
before I cut you myself
Pull up your head and don pout
or I'll give you somethin to cry about!
Sitting in your room,
Cryin up a storm
Is this what you want to do?
Live up your life down get in the bog
When that ***** gives your problems...
SPIT THEM BACK IN HER FACE!
So put down knife and live it out
before I cut you myself
Pull up your head and don pout
or I'll give you somethin to cry about!
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