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Old 02-08-2008, 03:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Arrow The Worlds So Big (and Im so Small)

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I can’t stand these stupid fights,
Lay awake hearing them all night.
I wanna get away from it all
But the worlds so big and I’m so small

I can’t stand gunshots firing in my own neighborhood
People think I’m insane, if only they understood
I think I’m goin crazy,
My life’s so damn hazy
And I wanna get away from it all
But the worlds so big and I’m so small

I hate this ****ing town,
Nothing but freaks all around
To few friends that are true,
So many pretenders that are askew
And I wanna get away from it all
But the worlds so big and I'm so small

And our country’s goin to ****,
What happened to the land where freedom dwells?
In a world where freedom is measured in coins and paper
The only way to get by is through caper,
And I wanna get away from it all
But the worlds so big and I’m so small

And this worlds a ****ing mess
Millions and billions in distress
No one stops to help, only to take what’s left
Even the government commits theft.
So if were all so rich and wise
Why can we still here the billions’ cries?
Why are there children who die?
We’re reassured its under control but it’s a lie

And I wanna get away from it all
But the worlds so big and I’m so small (I’m so small)
And I wanna get away from it all
But the worlds so big and I’m so small (I’m so small)
And I wanna get away from it all
But the worlds so big and I’m so small (I’m so small)
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Old 02-09-2008, 03:18 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Just out of curiosity: With what style of music would you yourself put those lyrics?
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Old 02-09-2008, 10:54 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Im not sure, i was thinking a punk or alternative sound, maybe like Blink 182(my favorite band) or Rise Against, but my friends a good guitarist so I'm gonna have him help me with the music. I myself have no talent with instruments at all.
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Old 02-09-2008, 11:06 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Then we think alike.

Good luck, and in my opinion those lyrics are very OK, and will be suitable with your style.
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Old 02-09-2008, 11:56 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Old 02-10-2008, 08:19 PM   #6 (permalink)
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the lyrics r good they sound like they come from the heart or something that annoys u i'd buy ur album if u made it into a song... two thunbs up!!
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Old 03-11-2008, 11:59 AM   #7 (permalink)
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They are OK. I'm just not the punk/emo type
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Old 03-11-2008, 12:25 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Those lyrics are not emo, not in the modern sense.

I'd have it more like a UK Subs style or a Ramones style
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