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you've bested me in a love song! XD The whole prince and princess stanza was corny but quite tender, the stanza: "Oh, baby you stole my heart, can you give t back to me" was funny and cute because it was literal but it's cool at the same ^^ I like it. my love song called "Baby, I can't stop loving you at first" is more feeling of love ache when it was grasp by girl's beauty or cuteness and experience of heartache. my favorite stanza of from was "What this love is for? a mixtures of sweetness and poison, Warmth surrounds the heart when it’s at the first sight, but its suffers in pain when its get rejected in day or night." but still your song capture various atmosphere of emotions for audience and mine mostly serious.
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Kyen Calisto: all i want is to sing, I expect only one thing from you and that is to listen to my messages
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