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Old 02-20-2008, 05:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Fallen

Well, this lyric was written very quickly (I'm way too fond of doing it that way)


Fallen
From my higher ground
Laying waste to all hope
The weight of dreams
Too much to take

Get up
Keep on telling myself
Lost count many years ago
How many times
Have I fallen

Disgrace
Of the mud on my face
Dirt on my clothes
Why can't I see past
The next obstacle

The next falling...

One dream is all it takes
To make the world go around
One moment has got it all
All that I need to live
One life keep on falling
Down, and down, rock bottom

Need to get away from me
From my unreal dreams
Find my soul, my life
Need to stop whining, and
Step up, and be a man
Take all the falling...
And
GET UP!!
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Old 02-20-2008, 05:55 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hmmmm... It's ok I guess, maybe I'm not a huge fan of Papa Roach style lyrics.
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Old 02-21-2008, 05:56 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hmm, well, I guess I'm satisfied with 'ok' then. If it's not really your style, I mean.
Thanks for the honest feedback.
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Old 03-07-2008, 10:50 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I suppose if you had it to Life Of Agony or Biohazard style hardcore it's be better...
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