again (this melodrama)

I don't
wanna wait in line
I just
Wanna see you again
I don't
wanna pay admission
I just
thought that you might listen
this time...

(Verse 1)
I know
I got in head over heels
and I know
that this is how it feels
but maybe
we could change things
for the better or worse
don't wanna reverse

(chorus)
♥this melodrama
made me wanna
wipe my tears against
my pillowcase again
now your face is in my head
I tried to retrace your long steps
It's been too hard getting it out again
yeah...
again---♥

(verse 2)
was I so wrong to try for you
I don't think so
what did you expect me to do
to tell you the truth

why can't I open up my eyes
boy, what have you don't this time
for the better or worse
don't wanna reverse

(chorus)
♥this melodrama
made me wanna
wipe my tears against
my pillowcase again
now your face is in my head
I tried to retrace your long steps
It's been too hard getting it out again
yeah...
again---♥

(chorus)
♥this melodrama
made me wanna
wipe my tears against
my pillowcase again
now your face is in my head
I tried to retrace your long steps
It's been too hard getting it out again
yeah...
again---♥

This melodrama
made me wanna
forget about you
and that's what i'll do...

hey ppl how bout some support here, huh?

1. If you want someone to comment, don't be harsh when you reply - give them time and they'll reply.

2. They're too "boyband" for me... they're ok but not mu cup of tea at all
(and no, I wouldn't prefer lyrics about killing... That's generalising)

Ummm, i'm a girl, but ok. and sorry my sister wrote the comment about support or whatever. kk, thanks and byes.

Hey there. I just read these lyrics as well as the other two before it, "I Miss You" and "Half Of Us", and I must admit that one thing that I found common in all three is an underlying feeling of sadness or remorse for things that might've happened but didn't. Unfortunately, I have to agree with Ultimate Worrier on the fact that these types of songs aren't really what I'm into, however that doesn't really matter to me. The content and quality is what really counts. I think the content in your songs are good. You touch on things that everyone experiences at one point or another. That way anyone can kind of compare it to themselves. In that respect, congratulations. I do however think that your structure is a little generic/formulaic, but the more you write and get more comfortable with what you put out, you'll get a little more adventurous and experimental with the way you structure things. You've definitely got something going for you here, so keep it up! I'd love to see what else you have in store.