yo check out me spitz init n add ur own,snd

[hobo_joe]

yo...yo...

im gna make a disruption
turn up da base an cause an eruption
stick on da uv light
we gna rave frewout da nite
frm da 1 to da 2 to da 3 and 4
sniff gram line an hit da floor

listen up,

yh...yh...

listen 2 da bassline drop

ere wee gooo!!!

drivin rnd in a pimped out suv
as u can see
im a bad boy mc wannabee
fink im dat
fink im black
fink ima chav well look at dat
turn my hat
2 da side
givva big shout out 2 my boys inside

sniff a line
spit a rhyme
1 more time
spit another rhyme
n sniff another line

blut!blut!

gta cocaine habit
see ur wallet
im gna nab it,grab it,blag it
off as u probably lost it
u presume its me
so u start assumin me
i get mad
start shoutin bk
surprise attack
lunge at u n smack
u off ur feet
quick defeat
turn n run
off 2 meet
my manz
dwn at da garage
sellin transit vanz
makin planz
makes his cash
by sellin fast
buy da last
of his stash
quick as a flash
i snort it up

gettin chased by de old bill
drunken drivin behind da wheel
steal dis car
steal dat car
drivin crazy dwn da m4
sniff a line
want sum more
sniff anotha line
pedal 2 da floor


"datz all i gt so far"

[NephilimTorture]

That is by far, one of the worst displays of "musical talent" i have ever seen... Without any effect on my opinion of this "song", rap sucks, but you are a HORRID rapper...

[hobo_joe]

hey! dis is my 1st attempt at tryin sumfin like dis,i havent even bin listenin 2 dis sorta music till recently tbh,i used 2 b in2 punk.metal b4 gimme a brake lol

[HellBellsLiveWire]

i do a line
off my babyz bhind
and I smok 2 jointz fo' free
cuz im 1 bad mother
so lets do echother
u know im hung lik tommy lee

lets get down
hit up ths *****in town
cause a riot all up in hea
Im always 2 loud
When Im whippin' up da crowd
and chuggin sum everclear

word

[Ninja TK]

Hah, not bad guys.. Here's mine ;P
Except, im not much of a rapper, so bear with me.
This is my first attempt at this style.
I tend to write it out more like Mike Shinoda from Linkin park.

Yo,
I'm not like the rest of you g's,
I don't rap about keepin it thug,
bein all gansta,
or gettin some drugs.

See,
I rap about my life,
keepin it real,
You homies ain't got nothin on me,
and that's the deal.

You spit yo words,
and maybe bust a rhyme,
but that doesn't hide the truth,
you think I'm blind?

You just scared little babies,
cryin' in yo crib,
late at night cuz you know that the truth is
you just lead a bad life,
and wish it all away,
that's why you get the drugs,
even though they only end in pain.

[hobo_joe]

those were both sick

keep it up

[Dangerfield]

lol i wrote this in class when i was bored
so if u think its bad, i dont blame ya

oh yeah, its kinda random to...

trippin, slippin cause i aint grippin, my shoes is rippin, my ice is glistenin, powerade sippin, gangsta limpin, tears r drippin, zippers zippin, silver liquid dippin, keys flippin, playas pimpin, gat on my hip n', devils impin, merchants jippin, caddies tippin

my flow makes money, alotta cheese
my phone stay buzzin like bumblebees

if my flow wanna go straight out the do
then i leave cause i dont wanna stay hear no mo

If my flow wanna take it up to the skies
then i throw it up there for everyones eyes

so b4 you step up you better think carefully
cause my flow will kick yo *** in a flash like jet li

[hobo_joe]

Ima lyrical thief
a lyrical bandit
all u h8erz
u can stand it

like ur wallet,ur mobile fone
il steal ur rhythms,steal ur rhymes
mc dis,mc dat
woah look,dat mc's phat
is dat mc black?is dat mc white?
2 b perfectly honest i culdnt givva shite
u gt potential,well dats essential
2 da music industry
2 r business in da streets
plaiged by plaigurism
plaiged by cheats

...

all i gt again =]

[Dangerfield]

this is off the top of the dome
cant copy me like a clone
people flock to my shows, like a dog runs to a bone
cold like icecream in a cone

[Ninja TK]

Alright, this is all I got today..
Maybe I'll do better next time D:

You can't appear weak, man,
you have to spit a beat.
Bust a rhyme about how it went down,
but make sure to keep it street.

Don't label me like the others, man
that sh*t ain't true.
You just might end up like another,
MC that don't have a clue.

Cuz this is a brand new game,
different from the rest,
MCs spit their words,
and give it their best.

And in the end,
there can only be one.
Sorry homie,
but you done.

[damo157]

NephilimTorture this is for you

leave hobo joe alone
he tried his best
bet urs a mess
just confess
that ur talent is less

leave him alone
and get a better tone
you do better
send me a letter

wot do you really want u stupid bum
what was appening with ya mum
she screamed like hell
theres not much to tell
i rang the bell and she was quick to cancel

i spit on the mic im to good for ya'll
u stand up and i'll mak ya fall
back down ur a clown
he tried is best
theres that jealous frown

leave him alone
and get a better tone
you do better
send me a letter

my lyrics are tight
i dont wanna fight
cos i know i'll rip u tonight

see i just say whatevers there
there is no beef so why the stare
ur complaining it aint that fair
shut the F*** up. u lighter than a hair

you bore me
chucked you out a seven story
and ur back watching balamory
so hows a girl im horny
your disses are corny

you ****ing bully
like bulk or scully
mike or sully
can't u get me
cos u too smelly

who do u listen to ja rule
so thats why said it u fu**** fool
u know he cant rap
pure shady fan
just do me one favour k*ll yaself if u can
it'll save me from doing it
so come on holla back at me faggot
and we'll see who is the rap magnet




don listen to fools like him hobo joe
there just jealous.

[Halberd]

Ummm, I don't rap, really, I'm so incredibly Swedish / Chamorro, for one. And for two, I'm not really into rap, but you guys inspire me, I'm going to try it out. Here it goes...

Hardly alive
A sickness inside
Ice strikes my soul, relentless its drive
And here I stand, breathless from the force
Of a thousand voices telling me its worse
to die a painless death than to live a painful life?
You know that's sh**: I'm not hanging from your vice,
And while your free to stand still while the walls collapse
I'm the one pressing through, and when you see me perhaps
you'll give me a sign
But you aren't so divine
That I hault all my efforts just to show you I don't comply
Cause there's a future to be seen
there's a light to be revealed
And I'm not some f***** who'd let myself stay sealed!
No one holds me back
No karma keeps me down
For here on the mic, the amplified sound
This is my soul
Here's my release
The fire it flies
And the heat shall never sease
So strike me with your ice
I'll just melt it, burn the lice
That strike your blood and aim for mine
For I can't be stopped no longer
I'll escape now, here's my device!

[Dangerfield]

check this lol


When i spit yo game will be finished
chain frozen like cryogenics
i aint a dentist
but the teeth shine like 2 atoms smashed by a chemist
so scientific
my rhymes are prolific
flow is horrific
u broke, yo jewelery looks like its made of acrylic