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Old 04-09-2008, 11:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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At the Moment im trying to learn to play bass and guitar and well write lyrics
erm I make an attempt every now and then but im never satisfied
This ones about my 7th period class funnlily enough
I say it sounds a bit to emo but my friend thinks we can make something out of it
__________________________________________________ ___________________________
Centered Against My Will, I sit deadly still
The Blurs in this picture have faded
Oh, no thank you im far to jaded
Mid-day relief is here, and yet oh so far
Hidden, is the deepest scar
You Moved up and left without so much as bye
Oh No
last years model weeps rusted and broken
Its Tears are dry and still
self centered and so apathetic

(I cant seem to come up with a chorus so its just 2 verses)

It gets far to hot, in fathers melting pot
segregation from heaven and hell
Im blind to their stairways and Highways
Inner peace is far to deep
for this excavation of the heart
dear boy please dont mad
Wel all tried our best
maybe we can lie you to rest
On a chilly night, snow you ask
well it just might
Winter dreams broken in the morn
your sorrows and regrets form a smile
oh please stay there for a while
__________________________________________________ ____________________________


Well only the first verse is about my 7th period ern I dont feel like going into what it all means maybe later
>_>
so yeah
thoughts, advice, anything?
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