Save Me

[kcrosson]

Verse 1:
Why can’t I seem to get anything right?
Why do me and myself always get in a fight?
It’s like there’s a conflict inside
And I’ve got nowhere to hide
Am I the only one who feels like this?
Is everyone else living a life of bliss?
Some how I just can’t believe it’s true,

Chorus:
Well, I’ll keep running
And, I’ll keep falling
But, I’ll keep trying
I just can’t speak the words I regret to say,
I’m wishing that there was some other way
Doing things on my own never included “we”
But now I need you to come out and save me
Please save me
Save me

Verse 2:
Why is it so hard to admit that I need you?
Why do I fight what I know is steady and true?
It’s always my heart and my head
They’re at odds when I’m in bed
Am I the only one going through this?
Is everyone else happy with their life of bliss?
Some how I just can’t believe it’s true,

Bridge:
And when you do I promise that I’ll change my ways
I won’t deny your help and I won’t answer your calls with nays
I’ll be true to you because you’re true to me
And then together we’ll always be


Again, be totally honest with me. I wouldn't have put these up if I didn't want them ripped to shreads.

[Isi]

hey the lyrics are really good!!!! although i think the first verse doesn't fit to the rest that much, I mean the lyrics are all really great!!!

[kcrosson]

Thanks for commenting. Do you have any suggestions?

[Isi]

i actually don't have any suggestions because I think these are your lyrics and I don't want to talk you into anything!!! hope to read something from you again!! gg

[Krent_Calstro777]

it's is very god but there just few minor additions, for the chorus the "I'll keep running" to "But I'll keep trying" you need to add "on" to complete the stanza. like this ' Well I'll keep on running" And i'll keep on falling" "but I'll keep on trying to believe"
well that's pretty much it