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Old 04-20-2008, 06:13 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Coward in the Courts (opinions please)

I always have a problem with lyrics as I'm a very harsh critic of my own stuff. Just want to know your thoughts on these (it's short, but it's just how it goes with the song):

Coward in the Courts:

Such elegance begs its own crowd of tone.
Do you pour gasoline in the eyes of what's familiar?

I'll take a razor instead of your eventuals.
I'll send my reason away and sail around the world to hear you wonder why.

Masquerading like a coward in the courts.
Marry what's known inside with your waking hours someway.

I'll take a razor instead of your eventuals.
I'll send my reason away and sail around the world to make you wonder why.

The song is basically me reaching out to a few that I know that simply accept life as dull and monotonous, though I know they harbor inside a desire to feel fulfilled through their own aspirations rather than those placed upon them.
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