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Old 04-23-2008, 04:14 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default A song written in class (comments please)

This is a rock song that I wrote in class the other day.
It's the same style as my other songs, with the verses rapped along with the bridge.
Chorus is sung.

Bathing in Flames

Walking down,
the path that lies ahead,
remember one thing,
you left me for dead,
I cant believe,
this fate has forsaken me.

What did you think,
that you would get accomplished,
I'm coming back,
for my revenge,
taking you to the brink of death,

Bathing in flames,
I cannot see with my vision clouded,
but nothing will change,
I'm coming back for my reVENGE!!

Looking back,
at all the bad memories,
I remember a time,
when you wanted to be,
alone without me,
I cant believe,
you left me for dead..

Bathing in flames,
I cannot see with my vision clouded,
but nothing will change,
I'm coming back for my reVENGE!!
Bathing in flames,
I cannot see with my vision clouded,
but nothing will change,
I'm coming back for my reVENGE!!

We've been down that road,
one too many times.
But I still can't think,
with you cluttered in my mind.
Where else could I go,
except to you.
And now I'm left,
to bathe in the flames..

Bathing in flames,
I cannot see with my vision clouded,
but nothing will change,
I'm coming back for my reVENGE!!
Bathing in flames,
I cannot see with my vision clouded,
but nothing will change,
I'm coming back for my reVENGE!!

BATHING IN FLAMES
BATHING IN THE FLAMES
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