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Old 04-25-2008, 03:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Untitled and Needs Chorus!

I wrote this song except I can't think of a chorus for it.
It needs to be a rock type chorus that matches up to the song.
The song is about music, except the prechorus an chorus are about letting it go and to do what you believe, or stand for, and not caring about what somoeone else thinks, basically.
I NEED A CHORUS THOUGH! HELP IS APPRECIATED.


Word's goin' 'round,
'bout how it's all goin' down,
Listen hard and closely,
to the perpetual sound,
it will pick you up,
then let you down,
stoppin' you dead in your tracks,
makin' you hit the ground.

This is what it stands for,
this is what we got.
This is how it goes down,
whether you like it or not.

Chorus---

You're like the others,
tryin' to keep it hot,
'cept unlike the rest,
you cannot.
Speakin your words,
even though you know squat.
Keep that talk up,
and you might get shot.

This is what it stands for,
this is what we got.
This is how it goes down,
whether you like it or not.

Chorus--

[Rapped lightly]
This is what it stands for,
this is what we got.
This is how it goes down,
whether you like it or not.

[Rapped normally]
This is what it stands for,
this is what we got.
This is how it goes down,
whether you like it or not.

Chorus---

This is what it stands for,
this is what we got.
This is how it goes down,
whether you like it or not.

Chorus---
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Old 05-10-2008, 01:38 AM   #2 (permalink)
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hey i love this techno song all i no it goes like this,.
"your about to experience the ultimate sound"
and other parts it says
"i cant feel the melody"
plzzzzzzz help me i need name of song plzz thanks ppl
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