Hate By Love [Comments Appreciated!]

Hate by Love:

I tried to tell you how I felt,
But you wouldn’t look me in the eyes.
To you I am nothing,
and these moments away from you makes me die,
on the inside.

If I just had one chance,
One chance to show her I love her,
To show her the world,
I would never ask for more, (NEVER ASK FOR MORE)

I tried to keep this in,
But every time I’m near you walk away…
It makes me sick inside,
But my feelings for you will never stray..

If I just had one chance,
One chance to show her I love her,
To show her the world,
I would never ask for more, (NEVER ASK FOR MORE)

How could you?!
I trusted you.
I showed you my true feelings,
But you just tore them apart like they had no meaning…
For this I live my life,
HATE BY LOVE.

If I just had one chance,
One chance to show her I love her,
To show her the world,
I would never ask for more, (NEVER ASK FOR MORE)

NEVER!!

If I just had one chance,
One chance to show her I love her,
To show her the world,
I would never ask for more, (NEVER ASK FOR MORE)

NEVER!!

The structure is OK but some of the rhymes are "forced". The subject matter is overdone but the tag line (Hate by Love) is unique. Also, while other similar poems try to show the love/hate conflict that often accompanies a romantic break-up, there appears to be schizophrenia than conflict. I'm was expecting the poem to show a transition or a "lesson learned" after the tag line.
(like "I would HAVE never askED for more")

oh my god... that exactly what happen to me yesterday... I was feeling betrayed, the girl made me chase after her... but god... your song exactly describe how i feel.

I tried to tell you how I felt,
But you wouldn’t look me in the eyes.
To you I am nothing,
and these moments away from you kills me... on the inside.

If I just had one chance,
One chance to show her I love her,
To show her the world,
I would never ask for…
more, never ask for more…

I tried to keep this in,
But every time I’m near you walk away…
It makes me sick inside,
But my feelings for you will never… (stray)

If I just had a chance,
One chance to show her my love,
To show her the world,
I would never ask for…
more, never ask for more…

How could you?!
I trusted you.
showed my true feelings,
But you just tore them apart
For this I live my life,
HATE BY LOVE.

If I just had one chance,
One chance to show her I love her,
To show her the world,
I would never ask for…
more, never ask for more…

NEVER!!

If I just had one chance,
One chance to show her I love her,
To show her the world,
I would never ask for…
more, never ask for more…

NEVER!!