is noise too suffocating

hey all. im new here and just want to share some stuff and also get feedback as well as get to know where you all are comin from. hope this is a semi decent start. here it goes.

Noise
Amazing, never unceasing and relentless in its push for domination,
Sometimes stirs and kills both the senses and imagination
‘specially for the kids. the trick is
To drown it out with focus and fill with experience and knowledge
Cuz to not know is bliss
But when we consider the future of the youth
Its undeniable that the noise has caught up with our generation
As hatred becomes manifested a loveless world is left
A drought of still soundness but a heap of chatter
Listen to the silence, now that’s worth the work
The thing we all need to gather.

It's pretty good...