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Old 06-16-2008, 01:30 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Red face Song I wrote just last night (16thJune) - Please comment :P

Hello all.
This is kinda a random song, and its ok if you don't like it, I won't get angry.
=)


"When Everything Goes Wrong"


standing in the rain
wondering he could be
ive been waiting for a while
wont someone come rescue me?

I see you standing on the brige
my tears are streaming
You hold me tight
it feels like im dreaming

(C)
Even when everything goes wrong
I can always count on you
And ill never stop holding on
Holding on to you
'Cuz if i fall
Will you be there to catch me?
Will you be there to hold me?
When everything goes wrong.


Its like an angel fell from heaven
And the angel is holding onto me
This feels so sereal
Someone rescued me...

I see you looking in my eyes
and you touch my face
you make me so peacful
my head is stuck in space

(C)

if i leave you now
would you care

I dont want to lose you now
cuz i know you'll always be there

When everything goes wrong.
I can always count on you.
And ill never stop holding on
Onto-

(C)


Will you be there to hold me?
When everything goes wrong?


xD - Please comment back.
& Remember, I only wrote it last night, so yeahh... NOT My best.
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Old 06-16-2008, 06:25 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I think it's really good! Can you post some more of your songs? Check out my songs,
http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...e-streets.html

http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...56-shadow.html

http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...this-line.html

http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...ical-song.html
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