ok here's this song I wrote, so coment please and tell me what you think, I'll accept any changes you can make if you want, oh and it hasn't got a title so you know if you want and come up with some good one I'll be grated
thnxs !!
there's a ? IN ONE PART Coz I don't know what would fit in ther following the rhyme and that makes any sense so :/ (just in case it has to rhyme with around ) ok now the song
now it's called "final cut"
Fame and eminence walked by her side,
Signs of prominence and recognition ,(surrounded her)
Infamy and shame, she`d never met them
But her life was always state of sorrow
She`d have to fake it all the time.
Her teenage years have been snatched away,
This is but an early prestige condition,
Where this girl have been filled with media chems
Filming at one day parties on the morrow
This bussines is like organizad crime.
After all, that's not what she's about
No walls stop rumours from going around
Gossiping things day in day out
Let's leave the limelight
That's tearing me down
Runaway somewhere I can't be found
Fame is infamous there is no doubt
another song, no title
Linear Mode
