Lonely

[Fight4nothing]

Looking for some advice on making this better


Working Title: Lonely


Theres always been a way out
So no need to be sorry
take note to my gaze
you'll see no passion there

How far i'd go to know your soul
was a goal that took its toll
when i'm the ride and youre the wheel
this cars gonna pull on over

as your tears begin flow
and I leave you at your door
You ask for one last kiss
lips meet with nothing to say

---Chorus---
i remember you being lonely
always thinking bout your sins
so you tell me nothing about you
when i'm wondering where you've been
I remember you being lonely
always a leash around your neck
now I hear that youve been freed
Seems you got a taste of the world
---Chorus---

im starting to see the truth
it was good to be with you
but as my mind starts to drift
I realize the flames are dead


You forgot what I know about you
and all those temptations we kept in
all those times ive seen you cry
and the way you broke my heart



---Chorus---


---Outro---
i remember you being lonely...
i remember you being lonely...
i remember you being lonely...
I remember when... we were young.

[Rabbitdrive]

Hmm...

It's okay. I suppose it does go with the title albeit very cliché. I like your word usage. Keep it up.