What I Feel

my little rap song....paragraphs dont mean its verses...its one long song/verse...split it up cause its long an its just easier to read =]

Thinking of you gets me shivering
ladies don’t think you the only ones to get hurt
like a turtle it’ll take something special to get our emotions out
you did that but without explanation you also put the flame out

I know this has been said before but you weren’t like any other girl
you dressed different and smelt different
nothing to overpowering and didn’t dress to get attention
and all the guys still liked you, drooling at your feet
the attention didn’t get to you as you still acted sweet
this made all the fake plastic girls jealous of you
and every guy wanting to wake up next to you
the beauty is the choice was yours
and in our heart you saw me as yours
been waiting to be happy for years
and all it took were your eyes to make me smile
finding happiness after all these year was worthwhile

I still remember the look on your face to when i shouted out your name
I’d never been that happy and all my previous girls combined couldn’t do the same
many stars full of pocket came along but you didn’t care about the fame
leading me to believe that true love conquers all
but everything no matter how great has to fall
for every beginning there is always an end
the devil will strike those with something to die for
its like our love packed its bags and walked out the door
no explanation, not a word less, not a word more
just woke up one morning and the picture frame was empty
all I have are the glorious memories
closing my eyes and picturing you in my dreams
but i guess nothing is ever what it seems

some people say you weren’t happy and needed out
some say you cudnt believe it had lasted this long
your previous relationships weren’t always as strong
which made you wonder whether you were good enough for me
you said you needed to clear your head
but we both know things aren’t gonna be the same now
we’ve both shown doubt and lack of trust
maybe its best to go our separate ways and just remember the good times
wen ever im feeling down all i gotta do is add your name in all my rhymes
never thought the day would come for us to say our goodbyes
but you are always with me whenever i close my eyes.

Hey man, I like your lyrics, like them a lot! I don't use to listen to rap or hip-hop, mainly because I cannot make out the text behind all the noise. Never mind! Once I heard a presentation of poems, or rather rap lyrics, without accompaniment (I not quite sure, maybe there was some percussion or so, but very low, if at all). Reading your lyrics I had the rhythm in my head and it sounded just great. The second verse of "17 at war" drops out of the pattern, I'm not sure if that's intended.

You're quite productive. Keep going!

Bernd

thnx i'll see wat i can do