Swagger like mine

See No one on the corner has swagger like mine
they don’t carry this weight
obscuring my thoughts, not thinking straight
expectations to be great
if I follow my fate
I’m trying to keep face as I lead the race
if money comes will I change face?
Lose my soul or should I lower my pace
I’m just one man with one dream
should I embrace this talent?
destroy those who cross my path
its all a matter of choice
I hear the voice but do I take its advice
so no one ever has a swagger like mine
I thought I was mature so I changed the name
L.P. was the new me as lil poet drowned out at sea
started a new life but too addicted to the game
the needle in my shoulder reignited the fading flame
can I change me?
Not as long as fate controls my destiny, my legacy
to have the meanest swagger in class.

Personally, I'd stop rhyming every single last word like the last...
Too many rappers who can't rap off the top of their heads do this and it sounds amateur.



*awaiuts flaming for his honest opinion*

its really good