second lyric post, arent you excited!!!

this one is a little more sane, im touching on the mystery of life and how our guesses at life seem primitive to me at times, basically i have no fricken idea just theories... but yeah once again please be constructive, we all got jokes but im not looking for one have a terrific cold ****ing winter and if you are somewhere warm then go **** yourself because im jealous... please rate from 1-10 with 10 being highest


JIGSAW

Have I been wasting time?
Opinions are irrelevant
Thoughts are frail
And our minds are weak

So when you speak I shouldn't listen

All I feel is all I know
I'm all alone, I'm on my own
I'm free in shackles of gold
Looking for a better way to fit the pieces

We want different NUMBERS here
The puzzle is in a different code
The 4th dimension I can't feel
But I can touch...



Ok, I'll spare you here's a normal lyric... It's about my best friend when his heart was broken for the first time, he was trying to be a hard *** on the phone and he was still in some denial, but i could hear the pain in his voice... but he's happy now and his new girlfriend loves to have sex to a point that almost scares me...


KING OF RUSSIA

He's off the phone, alone in misery
Trapped in an inner frenzy, a world of philosophy
His heart is frail, his mind in weakening
Speaking words is no cure for a tired soul

A glass of vodka touched with cranberry
The bitter taste is unusually soothing
The streets aren't silent because the pigs are up
Also hoodlums make noise up above

Now are you listening?
Was I loud enough
The words weren't clear
So I'll clarify
You make no sense
I can't comprehend
Why you are leaving now
And not coming back

Tell me now that you don't love me
Cause if you did you'd stay right here next to me
Still you pack your bags oh so stubbornly
You look at me like I'm talking crazy

Now the clock has turned and the sun came up
Then it went away and the moon showed up

Well the sun has gone
And the party's on
Wish on a shooting star
That you don't come

You're not invited to this lonely night
Now **** the world, you're all uptight

I hope you walk away
To a phony bar
With phony poeple
That drive fast cars

Cause I don't give a **** and I don't give a damn
I'll just drink my drugs and strum my guitar

[Sewn Up]

I think both of the songs are good. Jigsaw is kinda of confusing due to the subject but is understandable if attention is paid. King of Russia is one of those songs, in my opinion, that bring to mind one of your buddies that's got the worst luck in the world because let's face it. Everybody knows one of those people!

oh wat is dat a song or a poem