unfinished rap

i know a kid just about my age
kinda strange, someday he'll live in a cage
drugs are all the rage until your earnin minimum wage
weed is his religion, the drug dealer is his sage
lets turn back the pages to the day of his birth
for what it was worth god worked his magic on earth
becase the mom struggled, but out he came
little bloody baby, kickin and screamin and untamed
its funny, things dont seem to have changed
same situation but the pieces are re-arranged
mom is strugglin, son is on the brink of deranged
experimenting with meth, and drugs far more strange
soon baby became boy, and everything seemed fine
single mom didnt even have to work overtime
but the babysitter slept right on through the days
while the wide-eyed boy sat and watched scarface
grade school was tough, the boy was prone to violence
teachers couldnt keep his mind in compliance
but his peers liked him, he joked in times of silence
he gained schoolwide renown for being the class clown
and after school he started walkin around town
one day he was asked by a man with bad breath
if he wanted a cigarette, the young boy said not yet
he didnt let curiosity take over his mind
but at only age nine he was shown the line
that fine line that seperates greed from logic
and it wouldnt be long before the young boy crossed it
and completely lost it, the boy grew a little older
his actions grew bolder, he met a girl and told her
exactly how he felt, and they started to date
but the girl would soon be cheated on by fate

Nice Nice, I like the flow and repetition. I would be exited to see the rest of it