check the rap, comments appreciated

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  1. AustinAskew said:

    Default check the rap, comments appreciated

    some lines continue to the next, so it may be hard to get the flow and rhythm of it just by reading it.



    the name is skewered, ill capture your brain cells and make em fewer
    the underground king, a lion unleashed in the sewer
    my stuff is newer, ill seek out your girl and woo her
    and then sue her for associating herself with you sir
    they need a new word to describe the destruction ive wrought
    most emcees that ive fought emerge with bulging blood clots
    on their brains, i switch lanes like im insane
    delivering lyrical cocaine to the great danes of the industry
    listen, lyrical murder aint a sin to me
    and us on the same stage just doesnt seem fit to me
    i diagnose emcees with lyrical herpes
    my words freeze their brains like lyrical slurpees
    that chick fergie said that big girls dont cry
    but then i expose you as a big girl and watch the tears fly out of your eyes
    cuz you realize your lines cannot touch mine
    lil wayne says hes the best rapper alive
    but ive never heard him say a word bigger than five
    letters long, ill extract your vibe with tongs
    and minimize the musical appeal of your songs
    its like ping-pong, your the ball and im the paddle
    im a mammoth in the midst of a swarm of cattle
    you wanna rap battle ill knock you off of your saddle
    and put you in your place, with your base defaced
    you better side with skewered, or get your case erased
    and you face replaced by layers of rust
    that were applied when i left you fools in the dust
    yeah you cussed and spewed to wackas* beats
    in front of jackas* freaks who say they run the streets
    but that dont make you elite, that dont make you nothin
    you look like the illegitimate son of mclovin
    put your sh*t in the oven, cuz its not hot enough
    ill just watch as your bling bling turns into cuffs
    never been into that stuff, the criminal state of mind
    your blind if you believe that my style can be mimed
    ive aligned my lyrical scope with the top of your head
    choose your next words wisely, or boom, your dead
    give me some ched, give me some mic cred, give me some brain
    give me some lead, give me some emotion, give me some rain
    diss me for fun, diss me cuz its all in vain
    i am the rust slowly enveloping your gold chain
    i am the airplane that got all the way to space
    racing shooting stars, and always taking first place
    my stuffs more attractive than jessica albas face
    please take a step back then down, in your rightful place
    Last edited by AustinAskew; 05-15-2009 at 08:40 PM.