what you think of these lyrics

just some lyrics i wrote let me now what u think sorry over swear words an be trufull oh an its rap

For some reason I feel f****n depressed
I don’t know why it’s like I wanna always rest
Always tired, drained of energy
Don’t now why I feel this way you see
Just don’t feel a lot like me
Deep Inside am in pain don’t now
Why it’s driven me insane guess its just gona grow
Just wanna show the pain but cant its like
I just gota get on the mic
An spit It the way I now how spitting a rhyme
All the time getting rid of my grime
Am I nice I don’t now any more?
I slice an dice you whilst you lay on that floor
Why I don’t now anymore why I say this s**t
I hate you go an die before I have a f***in fit
On you yer little s**t what you gona do

You see it’s not my fault
I am just f****n depressed
Maybe it’s best I get put to rest
Just wanna flip lose my grip

You see it’s not my fault
I am just f****n depressed
Maybe it’s best I get put to rest
Just wanna flip lose my grip
Sick of people given this lip
They carry on am gona kill em

Nothing seems to go my way
Don’t now what to do any day
Just wanna stand up and say f**k you all
I won’t ever fall will always try an stand tall
I will never break even when my hands shake
The day I quit will be the day you find me In a lake
Now look am dead
Been killed murdered cause of something I said
Heart of lead nothing bothers me
From pain I get my ultimate glee
Don’t now why you see something aint right
It’s like I lost my sight losing the fight
Should I give in quit?
I don’t now anymore don’t worry about this s**t
But if the anger gets too bad am gona have a fit

You see it’s not my fault
I am just f****n depressed
Maybe it’s best I get put to rest
Just wanna flip lose my grip
Sick of people given this lip
They carry on am gona kill em

1,2,3
Just feels like everything around me
Is falling apart
Like there’s no finish or start
I don’t now
How to let go
Help help

I am so pi**ed off don’t now why
Distance from everyone even now I try
Sick of people trying to pry In my business piss off
Sick of my motives being questioned every time I fart an caught
I am in pain inside
It’s like there was a point when my soul died
All the time I tried to get on with life
But depression like a knife
Stabbing me in the chest
Do the descent thing put me to rest?
Am a rebel with a life that’s dull an bleak?
Am I just a geek or a freak?
I don’t now let you decide
I will just ride
Life out all its ups and downs

You see it’s not my fault
I am just f****n depressed
Maybe it’s best I get put to rest
Just wanna flip lose my grip
Sick of people given this lip
They carry on am gona kill em

I'm still in the world but barely breathing
They say things happen for a reason
What am I to say when you walk out on me
Walking along the sideroads,
Raising arms up saying only but prairs
Praying to a god that I really don't beleive in..
Why am I the one to be played with..
It's like I'm falling to pieces
Heart trumbling down without a sound
When a heart breaks it doesn't break even..

Feelings of you gone are the worst days of my life
Not seeing you beside me at all feels like I'm living in a dark hole..
Looking at your face when..
All things were fine and when you kissed me it just lift my life up like no one else did
Listening to lyrics to calm me
Thou why should I be calm when I just lost the one I loved the most!
Oh seeing you with another man just made me burn!
And why make the days!.. of my life worst
When you was the days of my life that filled me with such happiness!
With such happiness!

Oh what am I surpose to do!
When you walked out on me when I was the only one to catch you from falling!
Writing on the threads with tears
Like what the hell have you done to me!..

Oh what am I surpose to do!
Oh when you walked out on me when I was the only one to catch you from falling!
Writing on the threads with tears
Like what the hell have you done to me!..

I'm choked up when you're living your freedom..
And I'm the one locked up in a cage bleeding
Now I'm trying to wait for you
Ah, but it seems like you've forgotten that I ever exsited!..

I was there for you when there used to be tears pouring down
Unforgotten nights when I used to see you at the best
Pearl earings with the beauty of the face you had
I wake up to see you by my side
Though It was just a dream so I better keep dreaming..
I better keep dreaming..
Better keep dreaming..(Oh!)
So I better keep dreaming!

What am I surpose to do!
When you walked out on me when I was the only one to catch you from falling!
Writing on the threads with tears
Like what the hell have you done to me!..

Oh what am I surpose to do!
When you walked out on me when I was the only one to catch you from falling!
Writing on the threads with tears
Like what the hell have you done to me!..

Ooh shedding tears without a soul seems like I'm completely lost
I know writting wouldn't stop the bleeding
Painful nights all alone seems like i'm truly dieing..
Breaking hearts that can't break even..
Ooh you got your suitcase
You left no love yet lefted a picture!
Looking at her face smile in the photo that I can never see again!..

That I can never see again..!
(yeah..)
That I can never see again..!
(ooh..)
That I can never see again..!
Oh!

Oh what am I surpose to do!
When you walked out on me when I was the only one to catch you from falling!
Writing on the threads with tears
Like what the hell have you done to me!..

Oh what am I surpose to do!
When you walked out on me when I was the only one to catch you from falling!
Writing on the threads with tears!
Like what the hell have you done to me!..

It isn't easy without you being here..
I struggle as the next day comes..
Still thinking of the best days we had
Running through the fields with a melody flowing in the air with birds singing...(yeah..)
You was my number one n that we had freedom..

Ahh, oh,
Sitting in the chair writting her letters hoping she'd read these as these are immortal..
Thou just letting you know..(mm..)
That I'll always love you..(yeah..)

The days we had are never to be forgotten.
Cause in the end I'll always love you..
And here I stand arms wide open..
Hopping you'd hear that I still..
Love you..(Mm...)

As beautiful as the hair you swing around
It's like I've been fully blessed for having such a girl like you come around
I love you baby when you run around, it feels so safe
so speechless as you take my breath away
feels like we're in a world of our own
Be the queen of my heart and never let go
Touch the heart and forever stay, though.
Stand under the mistletoe,
And let me take you through a night that'll never be forgotten!..
I said a night that'll never be forgotten!
(Oh!)

(Whoa!)
When our hearts combine it's like a world that shines!
Through the rough times you'll always be mine!
Thinking of you, non-stop and I know that things are all fine!
Singing to you when you're down, and rising a smile on your face
stroking your cheeks through the weak spots and I'm sure everything will be fine..


(Whoa!)
When our hearts combine it's like a world that shines!
Through the rough times you'll always be mine!
Thinking of you, non-stop and I know that things are all fine!
Singing to you when you're down, and rising a smile on your face
stroking your cheeks through the weak spots and I'm sure everything will be fine..
Everything will be fine.

You know,
When I see you it always lightens up my day
Holding hands tightly resting your head on my shoulder
Life cannot be better than having my girl next to me everyday..
Winter comes with snowflakes falling n breaking apart
I'd come and fix you and always be ready to catch you
till i'm apart of you


Snowy mornings,
Sun rising up with the snow melting on the ground (mm..)
Oh, and I'm up and theres no trouble to say if you're okay
Door snowed in, looks like we'll be staying here for longer
Gunna make her something eat while our relationship gets stronger
Watching her wake up with a smile on my face
Saying good morning baby how yah feeling
Goes over to kiss her with a script I wrote
Saying I love you baby and You're what I desired!!


(Whoa!)
When our hearts combine it's like a world that shines!
Through the rough times you'll always be mine!
Thinking of you, non-stop and I know that things are all fine!
Singing to you when you're down, and rising a smile on your face
stroking your cheeks through the weak spots and I'm sure everything will be fine..
Everything will be fine.

(Whoa!)
When our hearts combine it's like a world that shines!
Through the rough times you'll always be mine!
Thinking of you, non-stop and I know that things are all fine!
Singing to you when you're down, and rising a smile on your face
stroking your cheeks through the weak spots and I'm sure everything will be fine..
Everything will be fine.


I've got the time to go where ever with you babe..
(Yeah)
We can climb the cliffs in summer looking at the view
Such an amazing sight thou I'm thinking of you
Another script almost about due..
My heart skips a beat that my love for you is deep
And it's a love story that isn't so cheap
That isn't so cheap
(Mm..)

You've moved to the next stage up
That there'll be no such thing as breakups
Laying on the beach with sunset coming
And you're ontop of me and there's nothing to compare
Curling the smoothnes hair of yours and kissing you fair
Rolling you on the sides touching your thighs and girl,
I'll always care!!
Always care!


(Whoa!)
When our hearts combine it's like a world that shines!
Through the rough times you'll always be mine!
Thinking of you, non-stop and I know that things are all fine!
Singing to you when you're down, and rising a smile on your face
stroking your cheeks through the weak spots and I'm sure everything will be fine..
Everything will be fine.

(Whoa!)
When our hearts combine it's like a world that shines!
Through the rough times you'll always be mine!
Thinking of you, non-stop and I know that things are all fine!
Singing to you when you're down, and rising a smile on your face
stroking your cheeks through the weak spots and I'm sure everything will be fine..
Everything will be fine.
Oh everything will be just fine.


(Mm..)
Talking to you on the phone now
Able to hear your soft cute voice on the phone now
Always sends a tingling feeling down my spine that I love now
Has always been hard saying goodbyes on the phone now..
Yet come home and see her running..
Putting a smile on her face as I walk through
Jumping on me like and I barely came through..
Hugging and kissing her as I see andrew
Out in the open I see dim skys blew
A thousand bits of the season flowers that grew
Drifting off back in the day but then I met you
I met you

(Whoa!)
When our hearts combine it's like a world that shines!
Through the rough times you'll always be mine!
Thinking of you, non-stop and I know that things are all fine!
Singing to you when you're down, and rising a smile on your face
stroking your cheeks through the weak spots and I'm sure everything will be fine..
Everything will be fine.

(Whoa!)
When our hearts combine it's like a world that shines!
Through the rough times you'll always be mine!
Thinking of you, non-stop and I know that things are all fine!
Singing to you when you're down, and rising a smile on your face
stroking your cheeks through the weak spots and I'm sure everything will be fine..
Everything will be fine.
Everything will be fine
If you just stay mine!

(..Mm..)
And I say everything will be fine aslong as you're by my side
And promise me you'll be with me when things collide
Talking amongs't the horizon where there lays our first kiss,
on the seaside.

Oh..