New song, feedback is very helpfull

Alright so this is the first time I've posted anything in awhile, this is a song meant to be sung by a RnB singer, and featuring a rapper for the third verse. Singers verses are 1 line per 2 measures, rappers is 1 per 1 measure. Hope you like it.

(Verse 1) - Singer
This is Eli Wood honey Yeah comin out ya speaker
I know you smell my money And you are very eager
To spend a night with me I will make you a believer
Pass it on over baby I'm your personal receiver
We can hit the shopping mall and go on a shopping spree
Cuz I know you never rolled with a playa like me
We could live like the Hiltons and only buy that Louie
All you gotta do is kick it with the greatest emcee

(Chorus) - Singer
I know that you're thinkin I'm just a kid
(You're thinkin I'm just a kid)
You already know I be hittin the gym
(Hittin the gym, uh)
Now I know your a few years older than me, We will be so free
(I know, Older than me)
We can go all night if you get with it

(Verse 2) - Singer
My ice is shining like we're dancin at a disco
Create a human network like we're workin for that Cisco
Or maybe go vacation on the beach of the Golapago
Supplied with so much junk you think I'm workin for Nabisco
Hit me up on my cell phone baby we can take my jet
We can hop up in the pool and maybe baby get you wet
Hit me up on my cell phone baby there's no need to fret
I can give you the sort of weekend you can never forget

(Chorus) - Singer
I know that you're thinkin I'm just a kid
(You're thinkin I'm just a kid)
You already know I be hittin the gym
(Hittin the gym, uh)
Now I know your a few years older than me, We will be so free
(I know, Older than me)
We can go all night if you get with it

(Verse 3) - Rapper
You're now listenin to the best you ever heard
Up in the air I'm fly as a bird
I'm just spittin my lines like this like that
Hittin on yo girl like I'm up to bat
I'm so good knock her out of the park
God talked to me said I gotta build an ark
Round up all the fakers is what he said to me
It's a pretty good idea I said I agree
You'll be hearin my song by popular request
When I'm with your girl l'll do what I do best
Let's get this party started and not waste any time
I'll be chillin with some chicks drinkin Corona with some lime
I'll be tearin down rappers like they're only old growth
They say time equals money so I got a lot of both
I got skills just thought I'd warn you like Liam Neeson
(Futuristic **** like you talkin to a Jetson) or (Hop up in my Porsche while you only drive a Nissan)

Songs don't have to rhyme!!

these type of songs do