Plan b

My rap still ant where I want it to be
So if this don't work plan b's gotta be a masterpeice
Like tha ..mona lisa
Assalted with a deadly weapon
Is the way my rap I'll beatcha
No competition my rivalries all fail and go missing
Trying to battle me I'll be your worst decision
Come watch this boy get wrecked .. Front row tickets
but as you bob your head
You better make sure u listen
Words come out violently
Stabbing your every thought to reality
That you cAn't possibly battle me
I'm the higher power, knockin you down
Like terrorist knock down the twin towers
I'm hotter tha fresh led peircing your body
Like click clack you nobody till somebody kills you
Quit while you ahead nobody feels you
I'm equipped like a war soilder
I'll leave you badly wounded
I talk alot of sh*t but I can back it up
If you want me to prove it
I'll trash ya
You the puppet I'm the puppet Master
Me and you well never be equal
You want conflict bring it I bomb sh*t

I like that, it was very straight forward, good use of words, and even jsut reading it i could get the flow of the words and actually found my self rapping outloud.

thanx I appreciate it

I also think it's cool, your wordplay is isn't bad at all, and thanks for reviewing my pieces.