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hey tell me what you think about my lyrics i just wrote dont have a name for it but just rate them out of ten or some thing




im sick of yawl fighting eachutha
just be a brother, straight from another
well get high and wont commit a crime,
just aslong as we aint blastin ourselves for these rhymes
Their maybe times when we don’t agree,
but thats just life and theirs laws
Forget about wars and robbin stores
Think about your brothers in the struggle
Well help them make it on the covers of the newspaper
Not for killin one another
For doing something with their life
and putting down that knife
My bro 16 years old did his jail sentence no where to go
Give him a helping hand to get him out the ghetto
Dam it worked now hes in the store making his doe
Hell im so proud now he aint blastin
Him and his homies are just lastin
Yeah they survive.
lets make a place were death doesn’t reside
And no thugs collide
No cops rolling by,
We don’t need them cause were all in peace
Smoking a reef,

Help destroy the ghetto and all be family!

Give it a 2 your topic is good and what you stand for just work on your lyrics some more