Freestyle I wrote in 2 minutes...ok so it might be nothing special...

Re-edited...Thanks Bianca!

Do you ever get that feeling life is turning around?,
I've been down to my lowest,
and knealt on the ground
and ask for my lord to put an end to this life,
so much pain-so much anger,
the trouble and strife,
I ain't mad at you lord- jus' keen to express,
so many issues
got a hold on my on my chest
you see...
i live for this moment,
if i'm livin' for a day...
I pray for my angels to take me away,
If you're praying for me...
I pray for rain,
wash away the sins of the father
and take away my pain,
cos raw is emotion
it's like a drop in the ocean,
Purest Devotion...
When I heard you passed away.
Words become a rumour, hit me like a tumour...
Should'a got there sooner...
Running through that hospital ward, man... I hit the wall...
now all I got is feelings of sorrow,
Here today... but Gone tomorrow
Tanty B I miss you...I love you,
our time is Borrowed

hey again! this is really good, but i think you should get rid of the first line because it takes away from the meaning. bye bye ~Bianca

Thanks duly noted it was just a lil something nothing special as i said lol Dukey

lol

just edited a lil thanks

I Love It!

Thanks it might become a work in progress but then it'll be back logged with the other 6 i've got in production!!! Busy Busy Man!!

wow you really are busy!

umm, this is good, keep it up!!

Thank you much appreciated may possibly go into production? dunno it's in the back log lol take care and keep writing