Me Caught in Rhythm

ill be living and lusting and trusting and busting and fussing and listening to music that soothes the bruises that hurt and that burn in my soul as they stirr the anger's not controled
Im unleashed
im realeased
im untamed like a beast
that brings pain to its feast
then its slain as it bleeds
then its gone just like that
and its wrong and Im fond of it but i cant help it and i dealt it and i killed it.

its still sort of a work in progress. comment it please.

Good start would like to hear more! Dukey B

i think ill post the complete version on tuesday.