i been hood like this from day one

this was my first rap song so tell me wut u think .

My swagger is infinite yet chaotic, i live for ya allah
As I get hood you hang to every word i utter
On my block, you betta dip, as the ckrabs drip
bloods don't drip so ckrabs might as well skip
cause you don't belong in my song
You get shot cause you're doin it all wrong
When you speak you can't be weak but strong
so talk to me when u get ur city back
My lyrics is slick,so get wit it
i take over da rap game like, when i took over ya city
I'm the so original, im so bionic and ur like a kid hooked on fonix
i Collaborate to make great lyrics
First got into this rap game and got dissed
But they were convinced when I wrote these lyrics
Girls I was ****in use to hate to do any talkin and
Nowadays they all let the hands do the walkin
Callin me up, sayin, 'yo wut popin'
i been hood like this from day one


I'll go the speed and da miles and ur suckin my **** like a *****
stop Talking about all them weak *** rapers , that say the same **** in every lyric
So before you start hatin don't you even get started
Cause well your simply retarded
Now who's real and who's fake
Who's popin and who's dropin
Some ckrabs had the balls to smile
but yet they now try to dodge the bullets, the sound makes 'em work
Grindin , and dodgin gettin bold, but now their dyin and
i Told you before this is '09 stylin
I'm the Administer, just call me psychic
Now you know it's me mr.illville
u Gotta be simply retarded if you don't play me
im blooded, energetic and grindin
Time to rhyme, ckrab, I told ya
Stop whining , get your *** out of my city
Take ya like a piece of clay and mold ya in to a blood soldier
Treat ya like a *** and **** ya no homo
Stop bluffin
Cause you know what you’re sayin is nothin
im gettin rough and I'm blastin them suckers like donatello
i been hood like this from day one.. ya dig

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