Left Fallin Apart.....COMMENT! thanks!

Gonnamakeit: yes i hope your gonna make it too

theres just something ,inside me telling me that you wanna let go, I dont know... (saying)



It feels like im fallin’ apart, but then i realised that i was stabbed in the heart..
And now i wonder to myself, if i should’ve played it smart, oh........
It’s always you that I trust, but now you stare me with disgust...
When you don’t think about you and me, i cant guarantee that we can run free!!!
Oh.....
I isolate myself, cause...
I cant bare to see him kissing you, maybe its because im missing you. Oh....
And everytime i come close, you stare at me like i don’t exist
Is love suppose to be like this, all i ever wanted was your kiss
And you just give me shittttt ( sorry about the word )
Nooo..
Im pretending nothing in me is breaking down, but im drownin'
CAUSE, my heart feels like a drum
Beat it or leave it, you just cant resist but hit it (yeah)
In every conversation someone mentions your name
But our fame is goneeeeeeeeee
And you left me suffering in pain
I swear, i don’t knowwww
Keep wishin’ i’d never every met you
Cuaseeee
You kicked me straight through
And Left me falling apart.
OHHHHHH
Our love use to be soo high above, just like the doves
that fly around in circles
buttt as slow as a turtlee
Right now Somethin' inside of me,
Cant just let you go
And I cant have the energy to bloww
the candles outttt....
My heart now feels like a never endin' drought
where the roots in the desert never sprouts...
You left me in this condition
where i cant resolve this situation (noooooo)
our love just can't flow
Are you runnin' awayyyyyy, Is the world becomin' greyy
Maybe this jus ain' my day
where the stars shine brightly upon the sky
And where my love will never ever die
ohh this is makin me cryyyyyyyyyyyy

Baby i just want to let you know
Our love could've grown
Until one day you left me on floor
and ran out the door...



(Use It If you Want)

i like it..could use a bit of changes..but its like 90% good

i would like to use it cuz i have a beat that would go perfect with this
if it could only be longer for a full song tho...so if you could add more that would be great

HAHAHA, thanks ill add more since you want it and it'd probably end up in my rubbish bin. I would love to hear it once you complete the song, thats if you create one