Cant Let Go... ( COMMENT please)

Its just like it happend yesterday
couldve been a while back
but luckily it aint today
the day you left me
left on the ground suffering
left broken down to this
dunno how im gonna do this

My friends tell me to let go
But My Mum told me it was awhile ago
Im just asking you girl
just one more chance
so i can make it up to you
and have another dance with you
I know that i hurt you
but its killing me too
If only i didnt love you wrong
our love would have been so strong
i keep changing the radio as it plays the song
the song we both kissed to for the very first time

You wont relise its love until its gone
and your left all alone
And its too lateee
Our love use to be soo great
for anyone to rate
I know that i didnt deserve you
but ill wait for you as long as the mountains are blue
ohhhhhhhhh lalala

My friends tell me to let go
But My Mum told me it was awhile ago
Im just asking you girl
just one more chance
so i can make it up to you
and have another dance with you
I know that i hurt you
but its killing me too
If only i didnt love you wrong
our love would have been so strong
i keep changing the radio as it plays the song
the song we both kissed to for the very first time

How could i let a girl like you run off like this
I mustve been outta my mind
if only i couldve pressed rewind
i wouldnt be suffering like thisss
If i must ill get on my knees
and say pleaseeeeeeeee

My friends tell me to let go
But My Mum told me it was awhile ago
Im just asking you girl
just one more chance
so i can make it up to you
and have another dance with you
I know that i hurt you
but its killing me too
If only i didnt love you wrong
our love would have been so strong
i keep changing the radio as it plays the song
the song we both kissed to for the very first time

Girl dont leave me here to die
im asking you why
you left me alone in tears
just like all these yearss

(Use it if you want i dont mind, jst make sure if you make a song i wanna hear it )

shorten it up a little. and no ooo's, ah's or la's until there actual music in my opinion.
other than that i like it.