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Old 10-12-2009, 02:27 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Wink No more 3x5's

In case you were wondering, 3x5 is the dimensions of a photo. Anyways, here's the song and i'd love some constructive criticism,

I’m writing you to catch you up on places I’ve been
You held this letter, probably got excited
But there’s nothing else inside it

Didn’t have a camera with me at the time
This time I have seen the world with both my eyes
So that I can tell you all about it
Cuz I’m in a mood to lose myself in words

Today, skies are painted colours of a cowboy cliché
And strange how clouds that look
Like mountains in the sky
Are next to mountains anyway

Didn’t have a camera with me at the time
This time I have seen the world with both my eyes
So that I can tell you all about it
Cuz I’m in a mood to write to you and say

You should’ve seen that sunrise with your own eyes
I saw my life in a new light
It made me decide
I’m taking you with me every time I go outside
No more 3x5’s

Today I finally overcame
Trying to fit my world inside a picture frame
When I’m back I’ll tell you all about it
If I’m in a mood to reminisce this day
But let me say
You should have seen that sunrise with your own eyes
You’d have loved that sky
You'll be with me next time I go outside
no more 3x5's
just no more 3x5's
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everyone who's just veiwing but not a member, please sign up! if you want any songs written for you, i'd love to do it
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Old 10-20-2009, 03:54 PM   #3 (permalink)
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