I'm Gunna Live (first song)

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This is my first attempt at lyrics, I've written a lot of poetry before but I really want to write a song so here I am.

I'm Gunna Live


CHORUS:
I'd rather be dead.
But While I'm here,
I'm gunna give,
I'm gunna live,
100 percent.

The dark clouds,
Coming over me,
Storms a commin'
To not make me free.

I'm scared of the world,
I'm scared of my door.
I'm scared of myself
and my stegasaur!

CHORUS

The only two, that I can find,
Help me to understand this bind.
Like the tiger from the dream,
They free myself from what seams. (or they free me from my snake (it's me))

Like a nightmare,
That I'm trapped in,
I fall down hard,
To let myself win.

I'd rather be dead.
But While I'm here,
I'm gunna give,
I'm gunna live,
100 percent.

I'd rather be dead.
But While I'm here,
I'm gunna give,
I'm gunna live,
100 percent.

BRIDGE:
I'm Gunna give!
I'm gunna live!
I'm going to fly myself away,
To better place (night?), to a better day.

Cuz I wanna free myself,
from me.
I wanna swim intoooooooo the sea.
I want to find myself,
And make myself be me!

I'd rather be dead.
But While I'm here,
I'm gunna give,
I'm gunna live,
100 percent.

I'd rather be dead.
But While I'm here,
I'm gunna give,
I'm gunna live,
I'm gunna find myself and give
one hundred percent.

I'm gunna live!!!
da da da daaaaa
my one hundred percent.

I think I might drop the last part off.... It's my first attempt at a song and songs are a bit different to write then poetry, I find poetry easier. Anyways, criticism is always nice. I might try and edit it a bit more, I want to try and add some more lyrics.