Introduction To My Debut Mixtape - Shock Mentality Vol. 1 - Review!!

Aim to shock, break the lock, crush boundaries,
Got the block, listening constantly it had to be,
I’m on the top of this game, no fallacy,
I’m mentally prepared for what anybody can throw at me,

Never gonna stop, my path filled with enemies,
That I’ll rush, crush make dust, it’s insanity,
To cross, tick off, check the box, I disagree,
With the way the games been going, recently,

But I plan to fix up hip-hop and fortunately,
I came here with rap flowing, through my arteries,
Nothing before and nothing ever after me,
Can match up to half of my plan on my path you see,

Transform the definition of a skilled MC,
No one else posses half the integrity,
Intelligence, elegance I’m here to bring the remedy,
To what the games been missing, it needs it so desperately,

The operation to save it is going steadily,
But I wanna jump start, take off into infinity,
My destiny is to breathe life back into history,
When rap was at its peak, and not failing so miserably,

Appears to me as if rap is only for the P’s,
No longer care about their credibility,
When they’ve killed off rap announced its obituary,
Then where they gonna make their cash from, so regularly,

I promise I pledge to put my entirety,
Into making rap, great again, and willingly,
I’ll give up my soul and build rap up 10 stories,
Build it up like Rome, and never let it become the,

Wreckage that it did, like Atlantis lost under sea,
Buried forever if ever I could guarantee,
The death of me inevitably,
For my soul is entwined with this Hip-Hop legacy,

And even in my life if I never get on MTV,
Or even AKA, if I never shift copies,
I know that one day, my philosophy,
Will be studied as a man who fought so bravely,




Against the masses who want to see it beat,
Planning it’s defeat, try and make me flea,
But I’ll stand strong on my post, you’ll never see me leave,
Welcome to The Shock Mentality.

Cmon, Someone Please Tell Me If You Like It Or Not.. Would Help Me Out.. Thanks,

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They're really good but you have to make sure you have the right beat for these lyrics. Coz a rubbish beat can make your lyrics sound bad

Thanks for the review, yeah because it's going onto a mixtape with 50% new beats and 50% beats from otehr artists, I'm using the Jay-Z Dynasty Intro instrumental, I think it sounds pretty good, I'm recording it next week.

First I'd make sure you have permission to use other people's songs, beats or music on your tape.

Second the rap is OK, not a huge fan of rap but some is OK and yours is passable.

Third, be patient if people don't answer straight away, they may be asleep or busy or something.