This is my first thread and even if there's the poetry topic on this site, I thought to put it on the translation section.. Because more than make it read, I need really help to translate it.
So hope you'll not be mad at me!
I tried to translate it in finnish by my own, but since I'm not good at all unluckyly (but i'll succeed one day! One day far, far, far away of course , the result was a disaster.
That's why I'm asking help to you people.. It'd be totally appreciated.. Even because i'd love so much see how it sounds...
The poetry/abnormalthingicantdefine/ is this:
Once upon a time and the moon knocked.
How to die on a lotus flower.
Pale dawn of melancholy, flee away from this evanescent heresy.
Run to me, run to me, come to see the winter melting even the life.
Come with me, come with me, I'll bring you to touch the shining stars.
How the hearts fade away and you die in a dream, even the north wind will end its path.
Talking voices and fearing shadows, that's how it was on a hot day of torment.
Wipe your tears sad little girl, laugh to the spell of a gentle poetry.