Naser Zeynali - Bia Pisham

Salam

This is a try in translating Naser Zeynali's song Bia Pisham. There are not a lot of lyrics but it wasn't so easy for me to translate so I might have make up some lines Age tarjome in ro bebini (and correct it ) kheyli khoshhale misham.


توی خیالم تنت تنمو باز می سوزونه
Tooye khiyalam tanet tanamo baz misoozoone
Seeing you in my mind openly burns my body

جای بوسه های تو رو لبام می مونه
Jaye boose haye to roo abam mimoone
Your kisses remain on my lips

دلم می خواد حس کنم موهاتو توی دستام
Delam mikhad hes konam moohato tooye dastam
I simply want to feel your hair in my hand

دوباره بیای پیشم بمونی تو شبام
Dobareh biyaye pisham bemooni too shabam
Come back to me again, stay in my nights


نه من دیگه به جز تو عاشق نمیشم
Man digeh be joz to eshegh nemisham
I won't love any other than you any more

دلم می خواد برگردی تو پیشم
Delam mikhad bargardi to pisham
I'd like you to come back

بمونیم با همدیگه
Bemoonim ba hamdigeh
(I'd like that) we stay together


تورو می خوام بی تو چه سرده
Toro mikham bi to che sarde
I want you, it's so cold without you

نفسات دیوونم کرده
Nafaset divoonam karde
Your breathe is driving me crazy

کنارت آروم میشم
Kenaret aroom misham
By your side I'll find peace


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Oh where did this song come from??I didn't know he had other songs HEHEHE...Thanks for sharing it...
Oh Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, you are gonna kill me with your talentYour translation and everything is just perfect/amazing /wonderful/magnifique/génial

but here are some little points:

Age tarjome in ro bebini va tashihesh koni(تصحیحش کنی) kheyli khoshhal misham

Tooye khiyalam tanet tanamo baz misoozoone:
***Baz means "again" not openly , ***tanet means "your body" and tanam means "my body"
in my mind, your body burns my body again

Jaye boose haye to roo Labam mimoone

دلم می خواد حس کنم موهاتو توی [B][COLOR="#FF0000"]دستام= My hands

Man digeh be joz to Ashegh nemisham

Nafasat divoonam karde=your breaths have made me crazy

vali tarjomat harf nadasht, ali bood..afarin dooste golam

Awwwwwwwww kheyli mamnooooon, merci dooste azizam!!! It's soooooo nice of you! Hehe I couldn't have understood any of it without your patient explanations that help me learning Farsi Thank youuuuu for your corrections I like them so much!! It's so great to have the solution after having turned at length the words in my mind

Oooh I think I understand so "tanamo" is actually the short for "tane man ro". So when I sometimes heard "mano", it's also the short for "man ro"?

Awwwwwwwwww you're welcome,that was the least I could do

Yes that's right..
tanam ra(formal)>> tanam ro(informal)>> tanamo(informal)
ex: man ra (formal)>>man ro(informal)>>mano(informal)
Dastam ra(formal)>>dastam ro(informal)>>>dassamo(informal)

That's goooood to know thank youuuuu ^^

And is the word "Pisham" a short for something like "Pishe man"? If you want to say "back to you" would it be something like "Pishet"? (Soooorry if I'm making up new words )

de rienyeah "pisham" is actually "pishe man"
Hmmmmm your questions are getting harder and harder
If you wanna say for example "I wanna come back to you" that would be "Mikham bargardam pishet"
some other examples :

Biya pisham=Come to me

Sit beside me=Beshin pisham/beshin kenaram

Pishe ma/pishemoon bemoon=Stay with us

Is he gonna stay with her=Pishesh mimoone?

the key is not with me=Kilid pishe man/pisham nist

Hehe questions usually bring new questions But now, thanks to your explanation and examples, the use of "Pishe" is more clear, merci beaucoup mon amie

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