masks

swords clash and sparks dance across the risen sky.
while bodies on the ground left piled high.

two lovers fight a battle of fate.
each forced to wear a mask of hate.

a slip of the blade.
a mistake many have made.

just like a slip of the tongue which started it all.
so they stand tall,
and let their daggers fall.

cold steel rips through her.
an ell shaped dagger for him.

masks of hate melt away.
silently do two former lovers forever lay.

i didn't know what to title this, so i just put masks, any title suggestions? Also i'm not sure if i formatted this all correctly so please inform me on that as well

You're defo the Man!!!

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

You're defo the Man!!!

again with, "defo". what is defo?

I assume it means "definitely".I knew you'd had asked on another Thread,I couldn't help myself!

yea it defo means definitely

Philip i think Masks is just fine for a title bcs you explain it in verse 2 and then finish with it in the last verse.