first kiss

lips are burning
heart is pounding
eyes left yearning
time still turning

will i do it
will she do it
should i do it
now ill do it

looks of surprise
looks of shock
looks compromise
as our lips talk

haha got my first kiss today so im writing about it here.

Good start on both accounts.Can't wait to see what you write when you get to 3rd base.

As our lips lock would also do nicely, imho, hm?

As an impression poem - very graceful

Keep writing, Mr Sparrow!