check
I dismiss grave wounds
Like sbu's weak tunes
You're like a bunch of crazed loons
Tryin to release tracks called space runes
If you call you're stuff rap then you're rap is abbreviated
I lift way above as if everything was alleviated
When you make you're verse you better not make it a bad one
You're better off shooting yourself with you're own handgun
You're rap is outdone
Time for a new champ cuz i think we need one
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sbu vs Deleterious
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is sbu not on or on vacation? it's been 32 hours since my post and he not posting
Last edited by Deleterious; 01-05-2012 at 02:15 PM.
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Not exactly sure.
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Oh, what? Hi. I didn't even know that there was a tournament on at the moment. certainly didn't know that I'd be competing in it. not a lot of free time recently. it's ok though.
What are the tourney rules..?
active text flips not allowed?
fixed line number/format?
single round clashes with knockouts? -
sbu its fine you woulda beat be anyways
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Ah thanks shaadow.
I wrote a drop before seeing your post, so I went for 10 lines, same as Deleterious did, and no active text flips, just to be safe.
I missed the 24hour reply time by a lot though, so I really don't mind if I'm disqualified and Del goes straight through to the next round. either way's fine with me. -
fam.. you rap bland patterns to a bad standard.
..not de-tailed, but cat you lack balance.
it's backwards if 'Dels Wons' said once, no protests;
he's quick on a slippery slope down so go 'snoW sleD'.
I won't flip his text, or even read what he said.
yeah 'Del' is backward.. he's easily 'leD'.
he's only ever dreamt of schemes as deft as these so envies me.
Del's shine's minor. L.E.D.
he's gunned down with just one round, I'm a sharpshooter.
if he claims his steez are deep, I'll harpoon them.Last edited by _SBU; 01-10-2012 at 12:42 PM.
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Sbu
I'm here battling a 'unicorn' not real but I'll beat you in my uniform
You're watchin 'my little pony' for names
Start digging cuz this game is you're grave
A 'D1ck sp1tter' you're wits 'pissed'
A loose aim cuz you're 'L.E.D's missed'
I envies what raps are not 'technical' a strait up 'diss'
Like led my poison kill 'geeks'
Your first up to speak you can't rap for real i leave you in 'sh1t's creek'
You're voice compared is 'extremely weak' -
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i kinda got f*cked over with going against sbu first
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now he quickly admits defeat..
seeking pity and sympathy..
you're on some weak rap, I don't mean to seem mad though.
your shine's not bright.. so no you didn't beat shaadow.
you asked for my approval. you really think I'd like those moves?
Deleterious: when 'De-letter'ed he's left as 'i owe u's.
Del isn't sick, he's in a delirious state.
take his basic round and break it down. he deteriorates.
his crass rap patterns are jam-packed with fallacies.
rookie.. you're even more p*ssy than my phallus sees. -
"you asked for my approval. you really think I'd like those moves? Deleterious: when 'De-letter'ed he's left as 'i owe u's."
That's why u gotta stick around bruv. Crazy creativity