Hey guys wondering if you could rate my rap.. thanks im new here btw

Have you ever wondered what the world would be without all the hurt and pain
Every day its just thunder, while we're just sittin round and cursin rain
Watchin the news everyday its people dying or killing
With some teens about those drugs, their either buying or dealin
And sometimes i think to myself, like how could this have just happened
and i can't do nothin about it, sitting here and just rappin
but man you know i thirst rappin, like those kids in Rwanda
thirst after water, really wish i could, just lend a hand, or
A bottle, perhaps a jug, maybe a can
of a coke, true i'm an ordinary bloke who's tryina cope, but it doesnt mean i don't care about the words i just spoke..

Sometimes you don't really know if tomorrow's gonna be promised
And you don't know where the cash is gonna come or be from, its
pretty messed up, most people just get stressed up,
But remember we just gotta stay positive and stick your chest up,
bad things happen cause God's tryina test us, do don't let these things best us...
I'm done.

please let me know what you thought...it was just a keystyle