We are all Suffering in Silence.

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  1. Max Bass said:

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    One of the first rap i wrote, it's talking of my point of view about life. A sort of confession.

    Chorus : a hook, with children voices like in a choral.
    1st verse : Introduction of myself, some rhetoric questions.
    2nd verse : Dialog with my death best friend.
    3rd verse : Conclusion

    Chorus :
    We are all suffering in silence
    We are not perfect but we try
    We are all united by strong ties
    We will stay strong till we die
    Till we fell by the way side,
    It's maybe better on the other side.

    Yeah...

    Never regretting the choices that i'm making,
    Ever been just in the words that i'm saying,
    And during this song i promise to be honest,
    To take the best, and to f*** all the rest,
    To tell you my own hell-lifestory
    - Like if you were my special guest,
    To share those pains hidden continuously
    Behind my lyrics, and my strong chest,
    To tell you the things that i will never forget,
    Those moments spent out there, lonely,
    - It was cold and wet,
    People get what they get,
    It don't matter if they deserve it,
    It's a fatality, just admit it,
    Dear God can you answer to my request ?
    Are you a f***in' A**h***
    - Or just a f***in' coward ?
    'Cause for all the s*** you've done
    - I deliver you, this Award
    Keep it safely, I hope you won't going mad,
    It would be a shame to show your real face,
    But for me it's to late, I go back to my ward,
    Holding my baby and my blackguards,
    Till the end, till the dead, I'm their safeguard.

    Chorus :
    We are all suffering in silence
    We are not perfect but we try
    We are all united by strong ties
    We will stay strong till we die
    Till we fell by the way side,
    It's maybe better on the other side.

    When I look up to the sky, I hope
    That I can see your light shining,
    - Like if i'm under dope,
    Glimmering in my eyes, Brightening,
    Through the clouds,
    I want to scream this load,
    More aloud, than the loud,
    Because yes I'm missing you,
    No matter what i'm going through,
    You were the only one who knew,
    The tears of my false-smiles,
    The reasons why i made everything rile,
    And if you hear me through the night,
    Be proud of me darling, I'm a strong knight,
    With a soul tight, that you bite,
    With our sweet memories,
    But I want you to know that :
    "Maybe time is our enemy,
    But wherever you're at,
    I'm thinking about you, till I join you,
    In the heaven of heaven,
    Where everything is as sweeter as you,
    Maybe i'm no more eleven,
    But I will introduce my girl to you,
    The girl who made my heart beat again,
    The woman, who protect my soul from rain,
    To introduce you the girl of my life,
    The girl who deserve to be my wife.

    Chorus :
    We are all suffering in silence
    We are not perfect but we try
    We are all united by strong ties
    We will stay strong till we die
    Till we fell by the way side,
    It's maybe better on the other side.

    I wonder what would happen,
    If your heart, didn't stop flappin',
    I don't know what would happen,
    Maybe my life wouldn't be snappin',
    But I look right in my back,
    Funny how we can recognize,
    All those f***in' quack,
    Betrayals, manipulation and Lies,
    I'm the lyrical miracle, ready to attack,
    Are you ready to face what i'm about ?
    You want your face engraved on the grout ?
    I'm ever ready to face every bout !
    Tears, Broken smiles, Broken heart,
    I think you know how it's hurt,
    Moon isn't the same, come back to earth,
    More higher you go, more your landing
    - Will be a big-splash
    Life is nothing more than a chain-crash,
    Weakness are starting from the first clash,
    The pain and regrets can still hash your dash,
    But remember that love blow out, in one flash,
    More unpredictable and surprising than a rash,
    I guess I'd rather hurt, than feel nothing,
    It would be a shame to not suffering,
    Not listening, what we have to learn,
    Not own what we have to earn,
    But we are all suffering in silence,
    Between us there's not a lot of difference.

    Chorus :
    We are all suffering in silence
    We are not perfect but we try
    We are all united by strong ties
    We will stay strong till we die
    Till we fell by the way side,
    It's maybe better on the other side.

    Please give some feedback.
    Last edited by Max Bass; 07-25-2010 at 06:29 AM. Reason: Correction
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    Those moments spent out there, lonely,
    - It was cold and wet,
    People get what they get,
    It don't matter if they deserve it,
    It's a fatality, just admit it,
    When I read that part, I just started tearing up

    There's so much truth behind this song!
  3. Max Bass said:

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    Thanks a lot LyricsAngel, I'm proud of those tears, I've done my best for write this, and it's pretty good to be emotional

    The 3rd verse has been added, I don't know if it's a good one, so please, telle me what you think about it !
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    LyricsAngel said:

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    I said there's so much truth behind this song,and now I want to take it back. There's too much truth here. Maybe I'm too young to know all about the world, but I know you're right with every single word you said about it (my English is really lame, isn't it?
  5. Max Bass said:

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    No, your english is good. I'm French, but I do my best too
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    Inskeepruler said:

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    This is well written. Besides, I know people that can't speak English well...and they've lived here they're whole lives. lol
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Max: The title plus "We are all united..." because of all the crap this world can throw at the fragile soul ... great work, from sacred place in the humand psyche, I feel it so so much.

    Angel, , yes, too much truth .. and also, be proud of what you write too, I read everything you post here
    Last edited by MoonRide*r*; 07-23-2010 at 08:49 AM. Reason: written on cell, lousy functionality, can't correct errors .. sorry :-/
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  8. Max Bass said:

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    Moon : Great idea, I was thinkin' about it, but i wasn't sure at all ! Adopted, i change the title.
    Thank you very much.
    Inke : Haha thanks ! Yes it's true, but you know i do my best !
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    Krent_Calstro777 said:

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    I really like it, it's speak of the truths engraved in the world, but there few concept of truth i've yet to understand but things will work through eventually. maybe i can help to revised them a bit better english? if you can i'm glad to edit for you.
    Damning Reficul: Song is like singing from the light whilst the emotions can be so raw from the darkness.
  10. Max Bass said:

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    Yes, if you want you can, it will be interesting ! Thank you a lot