"Under My Skin" - Activ Eng->Rom [*]

[DeBaires]

This is my first time translating from English to Romanian, so PLEASE help
Mersi!

Yesterday I had no chance,
Ieri eu nu aveam o şansă,
You asked me if I like to dance,
Mi-ai cerut dacă vream să dansez,
Suddenly you touched my skin,
Deodată m-ai atins piela mea,
I feel it now,was it for real?
Simt el acum, era real?
Later when i closed my eyes
Ulterior când am închis ochii mei
I felt like i was hypnotized,
Simţeam cum erau hipnotizat
I live the moment of my life,
Traiesc clipa de viaţa mea,
In my heart i feel alive,
în sufletul simt viu

I got you under my skin,
Te am sub piela mea
Maybe you don't know how i feel,
Poate că nu ştii cum simt,
My love is real,
Iubirea mea e real,
I got you under my skin,
Te am sub piela mea,
Baby you should know that my love is for real,
Baby, ar trebui să ştii că iubirea mea e real
Don't you know that I got you under my skin,
Nu ştii că te am sub piela mea
Maybe you don't know how i feel,
Poate că nu ştii cum simt,
My love is real,
Iubirea mea e real,
I got you under my skin,
Te am sub piela mea,
Baby you should know that my love is for real,
Baby, ar trebui să ştii că iubirea mea e real

Everytime you call my name,
Fiecare timp(?) că chemi numele meu,
Simple things become a game,
Lucruri simple devin un joc
When your lips are close to mine,
Când buzele tale sunt lângă mele
I wish I could stop the time,
Doresc să opresc timpul
You're with me and i want more,
Eşti cu mine şi vreau mai
Take me to a higher floor,
Apucă-mi la o podea mai înalt
Even when the lights go out,
Chiar când închid luminile
We enjoy the music loud,
Ne delectăm cu muzica tare

I believe this is true,
Cred că acest e adevărat,
My love for you,
Iubirea mea pentru tine
Is bringing joy to my life,
Mi aduce bucurie la viaţa mea

[Lady_A]

Congratulations for a very good (first) translation, and here you have my "blue" corrections :

Originally Posted by DeBaires

This is my first time translating from English to Romanian, so PLEASE help
Mersi!

Yesterday I had no chance,
Ieri eu nu aveam o şansă,
You asked me if I like to dance,
M-ai întrebat dacă vreau să dansez,
Suddenly you touched my skin,
Deodată mi-ai atins pielea,
I feel it now,was it for real?
O simt acum, era real?
Later when i closed my eyes
Ulterior când am închis ochii
I felt like i was hypnotized,
Simţeam că sunt hipnotizat
I live the moment of my life,
Traiesc clipa vieţii mele,
In my heart i feel alive,
în suflet mă simt viu

I got you under my skin,
Te am sub piele
Maybe you don't know how i feel,
Poate că nu ştii ce simt,
My love is real,
Iubirea mea e reală,
I got you under my skin,
Te am sub piele,
Baby you should know that my love is for real,
Baby, ar trebui să ştii că iubirea mea e reală
Don't you know that I got you under my skin,
Nu ştii că te am sub piele
Maybe you don't know how i feel,
Poate că nu ştii ce simt,
My love is real,
Iubirea mea e reală,
I got you under my skin,
Te am sub piele,
Baby you should know that my love is for real,
Baby, ar trebui să ştii că iubirea mea e reală

Everytime you call my name,
De fiecare dată când spui numele meu,
Simple things become a game,
Lucruri simple devin un joc
When your lips are close to mine,
Când buzele tale sunt lângă ale mele
I wish I could stop the time,
Îmi doresc să pot opri timpul
You're with me and i want more,
Eşti cu mine şi vreau mai mult
Take me to a higher floor,
Du-mă către un nivel mai înalt
Even when the lights go out,
Chiar când se sting luminile
We enjoy the music loud,
Ne delectăm cu muzica tare or Ne place muzica tare

I believe this is true,
Cred că e adevărat,
My love for you,
Iubirea mea pentru tine
Is bringing joy to my life,
Aduce bucurie în viaţa mea

[DeBaires]

Oh cool. Thanks so much!!! I thought I had made a lot more mistakes