Sistem - "Soare" - Help *

Corrections please! Thanks!

"Soare"
"Sun"


Se spune ca vremea e frumoasa
It is said that the weather is beautiful
Atunci cand in suflet e soare
When the sun is in the soul
Se spune ca ploaia e mai rece
It is said that the rain is still(?) cold
Atunci cand in suflet de doare
When in a painful(?) soul

Se spune ca vantul nu bate deloc
It is said that the wind doesn't blow, not at all
Cand iubesti…
When you love
Dar frunzele toate se misca
But the leaves all move
Sa stii ca-mi lipsesti,
(You) Know that I miss you
Sa stii ca-mi lipsesti
(You) Know that I miss you

Te voi astepta,
I'll wait for you
Toata viata mea
All my life
Doar iubirea ta
Only your love
Ma poate salva
Can save me




"Departe de tine"
"Far (away) from you"

Lasi totul in urma ta
You leave everything behind you
Fara sa privesti inapoi
Without looking back
Nu cred ca poti uita
I don't think you can forget
Tot ce-a fost pana acum intre noi.
All that has been, until now, between us
Si nu mai pot sa zambesc
& I can no longer smile
Si nu mai pot sa opresc
& I can no longer stop
Timpul ce-a trecut peste noi
The time that has passed over us
Si nu mai pot sa astept
& I can no longer wait
Vreau mai departe sa plec
I want to leave farther away(?)
Asta e ce ne dorim amandoi.
This is what we both want

Refren(x2):
Vreau sa ma impart intre cer si pamant
I want to divide(?)/split(?)* myself between sky & earth
Dar sunt prea departe
But I am/they are too far away
Vreau sa te am zi si noapte in gand
I want to have you in mind day & night
Dar esti prea departe...
But you're too far away


* I thought it was divide - împărţi - but the 1st per. sin. for that is "împărţesc"
What verb is it?

"Soare"
"Sun"


Se spune ca vremea e frumoasa
It is said that the weather is beautiful
Atunci cand in suflet e soare
When the sun is in the soul
Se spune ca ploaia e mai rece
It is said that the rain is colder
Atunci cand in suflet te doare
When you hurt inside

Se spune ca vantul nu bate deloc
It is said that the wind doesn't blow, not at all
Cand iubesti…
When you love
Dar frunzele toate se misca
But the leaves all move
Sa stii ca-mi lipsesti,
Know that I miss you
Sa stii ca-mi lipsesti
Know that I miss you

Te voi astepta,
I'll wait for you
Toata viata mea
All my life
Doar iubirea ta
Only your love
Ma poate salva
Can save me

"Departe de tine"
"Far (away) from you"

Lasi totul in urma ta
You leave everything behind you
Fara sa privesti inapoi
Without looking back
Nu cred ca poti uita
I don't think you can forget
Tot ce-a fost pana acum intre noi.
All that has been, until now, between us
Si nu mai pot sa zambesc
& I can no longer smile
Si nu mai pot sa opresc
& I can no longer stop
Timpul ce-a trecut peste noi
The time that has passed over us
Si nu mai pot sa astept
& I can no longer wait
Vreau mai departe sa plec
I want to leave farther away
Asta e ce ne dorim amandoi.
This is what we both want

Refren(x2):
Vreau sa ma impart intre cer si pamant
I want to divide/split* myself between sky & earth
Dar sunt prea departe
But I am too far away
Vreau sa te am zi si noapte in gand
I want to have you in mind day & night
Dar esti prea departe...
But you're too far away

*a împărţi - can be translated both by divide or split. I guess divide would be a little more appropriate.

All in all, great job! Congrats!

Oh, OK cool.

Mersi mult Lady A!