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Am 2 căntece de Keo şi unul scurt de Suie Paparude. Mersi anticipat!

1) "Dispari"
"You disappear

Eu te cunosc ,eu te am mai vazut
I know you, I have seen you more(?)
Deseori in gand ,dar nu te cunosc
Often in my mind, but I don't know you
Tu ai disparut , …
You disappeared
Risipita n vant
Dissipated in the wind

Esti k un mister , vii sa imi zambesti
You're like a mystery, you come to smile at me
In gand mereu ,caut un reper
In my mind, I always look for a bench-mark
Nu stiu cine esti , te porti asa firesc
I don't know who you are, I carry you so naturally
Ma obsedezi , innebunesc
You haunt me, I go crazy

Refren :
Dispari
You disappear
Nu existi
You don't exist
Ma distrugi
You destroy me
Nu rezisti
You can't resist
Tu aprinzi
You set fire
Tot ce’i mai bun intre noi
All is better between us
Ne completam amandoi ( x2 )
We complete each other(?)

Tresarind in somn ,intr un vis ciudat
Twitching in sleep, in a strange dream
M’am impotmolit , nu mai pot misca
I got stuck in the mud, I can't move anymore
M’ai inconjurat….
You surrounded me
Nu pot sa te gonesc din mintea mea
I can't banish you from my mind
Innebunesc
I go crazy

2) "As vrea sa stii"
"I'd like you to know"

Nu stiu nici cum, nici cand e bine
I don't even know how, nor when it's good
Poate acum langa tine sa-ti spun ceva
Maybe now near you I tell you something
La ce gandesc, dar nu as vrea sa ma grabesc.
about what I think, but I wouldn't like to hurry myself

Nu stiu cum sa fac sa-ti spun mai frumos
I don't know how to tell you more beautifully
Ca sa nu-ti para mincinos
that it seems deceptive to you
Dar eu n-o sa tac si azi am decis
But I won't shut up & today I decided
Sa-ti zic ce-am de zis.
To say to you what I have to say

Refren:
As vrea sa stii ca mi-ai placut din prima zi
I'd like you to know that I liked you from the first day
Cand te-am vazut n-am indraznit si am tacut
When I saw you I didn't fall in love/we fell in love & I shut up
As vrea sa stii...
I'd like you to know

Dac-as jura poate nu-ti place si-ai prefera sa-ti dau pace
If I'd swear, maybe you don't like it & you preferred for me to give you peace(?)
Dar eu, nebun, chiar daca taci,
But I, crazy, even if you shut up,
Iti spun si-ti spun cat de mult imi placi.
I tell you & I tell you how much I like you

Daca in prima zi vremea a trecut
If on the first day the time has passed
Nu simti nimic ca la inceput
You don't feel like at the beginning
Si fie ce-o fi, ca vrei, ca nu vrei
& it's to what it is(?), that you want, that you don't want
Eu mi-am zis OK.
I told myself "OK"

3) "Pentru inimi"
"For hearts"

pentru ca sunetul ajunge
because the sound takes over
din difuzoare pana-n sange
from the speakers till in (our) blood
pentru ca inima ta moare
because your heart dies
atunci cand sunetul dispare
when the sound disappears

1) "Dispari"/"disappear"

Eu te cunosc ,eu te am mai vazut
I know you, I have seen you before
Deseori in gand ,dar nu te cunosc
Often in my mind, but I don't know you
Tu ai disparut , …
You have disappeared
Risipita n vant
Dissipated in the wind

Esti k un mister , vii sa imi zambesti
You're like a mystery, you come to smile to me
In gand mereu ,caut un reper
In my mind, I always look for a bench-mark
Nu stiu cine esti , te porti asa firesc
I don't know who you are, you act so naturally
Ma obsedezi , innebunesc
You haunt me, I go crazy

Refren :
Dispari
(You) disappear
Nu existi
You don't exist
Ma distrugi
You destroy me[/B]
Nu rezisti
You can't resist
Tu aprinzi
You set fire
Tot ce’i mai bun intre noi
All is better between us
Ne completam amandoi ( x2 )
We complete each other

Tresarind in somn ,intr un vis ciudat
Twitching in sleep, in a strange dream
M’am impotmolit , nu mai pot misca
I got stuck in the mud, I can't move anymore
M’ai inconjurat….
You surrounded me
Nu pot sa te gonesc din mintea mea
I can't banish you from my mind
Innebunesc
I go crazy

2) "As vrea sa stii"
"I'd like you to know"

Nu stiu nici cum, nici cand e bine
I don't even know how, nor when it's good
Poate acum langa tine sa-ti spun ceva
Maybe now near you I tell you something
La ce gandesc, dar nu as vrea sa ma grabesc.
about what I think, but I wouldn't like to hurry myself

Nu stiu cum sa fac sa-ti spun mai frumos
I don't know how to tell you more beautifully
Ca sa nu-ti para mincinos
so that it doesn't seems deceptive to you
Dar eu n-o sa tac si azi am decis
But I won't shut up & today I decided
Sa-ti zic ce-am de zis.
To say to you what I have to say

Refren:
As vrea sa stii ca mi-ai placut din prima zi
I'd like you to know that I liked you from the first day
Cand te-am vazut n-am indraznit si am tacut
When I saw you I didn't dare & I shut up
As vrea sa stii...
I'd like you to know

Dac-as jura poate nu-ti place si-ai prefera sa-ti dau pace
If I'd swear, maybe you won't like it & you would preferre for me to give you some peace
Dar eu, nebun, chiar daca taci,
But I, crazy, even if you shut up,
Iti spun si-ti spun cat de mult imi placi.
I tell you & I tell you how much I like you

Daca in prima zi vremea a trecut
If on the first day the time has passed
Nu simti nimic ca la inceput
You don't feel anything like at the beginning
Si fie ce-o fi, ca vrei, ca nu vrei
& it's to what it is, that you want, that you don't want
Eu mi-am zis OK.
I told myself "OK"

3) "Pentru inimi"
"For hearts"

pentru ca sunetul ajunge
because the sound reaches
din difuzoare pana-n sange
from the speakers till in (our) blood
pentru ca inima ta moare
because your heart dies
atunci cand sunetul dispare
when the sound disappears[/QUOTE]

Thanks!

Originally Posted by DeBaires

Thanks!

u welcome..there were just a few..nice work

Haha, mersi mult

HEllo dear friend, thanks for asking, my extra opinion !
Therefore, help is on it's way :

1. I don't agree with this :
Tot ce’i mai bun intre noi
All is better between us this mean -> Totul e mai bine între noi
So it should have been, according to me,
All that is best between us, don't u agree? ( What about you[b/ioana[/b]?)

2. M’am impotmolit , nu mai pot misca
I got stuck in the mud, I can't move anymore
- - - Here my friend, you don't have to add" the mud" ( cause it doesn't specify " în noroi (=in the mud) ok?
I got stuck, I can't....

3.Cand te-am vazut n-am indraznit si am tacut
When I saw you I didn't dare & I shut up
I think it would be more fit to say:
Cand te-am vazut n-am indraznit si am tacut
When I saw you I didn't dare & I kept silent

4.
Dac-as jura poate nu-ti place si-ai prefera sa-ti dau pace
If I'd swear, maybe you don't like it & you preferred for me to give you peace(?)
- - - We are not talking here about the 'peace of the soul' or 'peace from the priest'
a da pace = to leave somebody alone, to live it be..
So it would be - > f I'd swear, maybe you don't like it & you might prefere for me to leave you alone

5.
Si fie ce-o fi, ca vrei, ca nu vrei
& it's to what it is(?), that you want, that you don't want
And be what it is, that you...

The rest is just dandy
Really, you don't stop to amaze me , you improve i guess in every second
Eres muy intelligente amigo mio!

Thank you both so much for the corrections!