Corectări, vă rog!

Am o melodie de Voltaj, mersi!

"Pe nori"
"On clouds"

Langa tine pare asa aproape cerul cu stele
Near you it seems the sky with stars is close(?)
Ma ridic pe varfuri si pot sa le-ating
I raise myself on summits/tops & I can touch them (the stars?)
Langa tine sunt cu capul in nori, pierdut printre ei
Near you I have my head in the clouds, lost among them
Ma saruti in zori si ma trezesc zambind.
You kiss me at dawn/in the morning & you wake me up smiling

Refren:
Doar tu imi dai aripi sa zbor
Only you give me wings to fly
Cu tine-n gand parca-as pasi pe nori
With you in mind it seems I could step/walk on clouds
Si cand ma privesti nu mai sunt eu
& when you look at me I'm no longer me
Ma indragostesc din nou ca-n clasa a-X-a de liceu
I fall in love again like in "a-X-a" class in high school
Pare usor, cu tine-n gand parca-as pasi pe nori
It seems easy, with you in mind it seems I could walk on clouds

II:
Langa tine pot sa trec usor prin orice furtuna
Near you I can pass easily through any storm
Nici un strop de ploaie nu ma poate opri
Not even a drop of rain can stop me
Langa tine simt ca inima mea ar vrea sa-ti spuna
Near you I feel that my heart could want to tell you
Te iubesc mai mult in fiecare zï.
I love you more everyday

Here you are I didn't have much to correct

Langa tine pare asa aproape cerul cu stele
Near you it seems the sky with stars is close(?)
Beside you the starry sty seems so near
Ma ridic pe varfuri si pot sa le-ating
I raise myself on summits/tops & I can touch them (the stars?)
I upend on my tiptoe and I can touch them(yes the starts )
Langa tine sunt cu capul in nori, pierdut printre ei
Near you I have my head in the clouds, lost among them
Near you I am distracted, lost among the clouds
(sth like this anyway, if anyone has a better idea, feel free to stick it in cu capu-n nori - is an e4xpression of being with his/her mind elsewhere)
Ma saruti in zori si ma trezesc zambind.
You kiss me at dawn/in the morning & you wake me up smiling
... & I wake up smiling
(what u wrote, you wake me up smiling = ma trezesti zambind)

Refren:
Doar tu imi dai aripi sa zbor
Only you give me wings to fly
Cu tine-n gand parca-as pasi pe nori
With you in mind it seems I could step/walk on clouds
...seems as If I would...
Si cand ma privesti nu mai sunt eu
& when you look at me I'm no longer me
Ma indragostesc din nou ca-n clasa a-X-a de liceu
I fall in love again like in "a-X-a" class in high school
...like in the 10th grade of high school
Pare usor, cu tine-n gand parca-as pasi pe nori
It seems easy, with you in mind it seems I could walk on clouds
....it seems as if I would walk on clouds
(could walk - as putea pasi / would walk - as pasi)

II:
Langa tine pot sa trec usor prin orice furtuna
Near you I can pass easily through any storm
Nici un strop de ploaie nu ma poate opri
Not even a drop of rain can stop me
Langa tine simt ca inima mea ar vrea sa-ti spuna
Near you I feel that my heart could want to tell you
....my heart would want to tell you
(the same mistake as upper in the last line)
Te iubesc mai mult in fiecare zï.
I love you more everyday

Mersi Tigress, such silly mistakes...it was late & I was tired haha

No need to excuse yourself
I know you in your best shape, u'r great
Ouv..and u'r welcome

Haha, thnx.

Imi poti sa explici de ce se zice "a-x-a" pentru "10th grade"? X-ul vine din cifre romane?

Corect ar fi "a 10-a" sau "a X-a" (observi ca una dintre linii lipseste in ambele forme).

O alta corectura ar fi faptul ca fie folosesti "Imi poti explica" fie "Poti sa-mi explici".

Bafta in continuare.

Si ca sa-ti raspundem la intrebare: da, X-ul reprezinta o cifra romana.

Va multumesc Lady A si Swatch

Cu placere.