Voltaj - Un pas in fata

Imi place atat cantul acest. ^_^ Traducerea mea ati putea s-o corecta?

Asculta-ma si am sa-ti spun povestea
Listen to me and I will tell you the story
Ca sa stii si tu, am sa-ti dau reteta mea
So that you too know, I’m gonna give you my recipe
Iti zic eu cum sta treaba :
I tell you how to stay busy
Sa nu traiesti degeaba nu e prea greu
So that you don’t live in vain, it’s not too hard
De o sa faci ca mine o sa-ti mearga bine.


Cum ?
How?
Stai ca-ti spun (stai ca-ti spun), stai
You stay so I tell you (you stay so I tell), stay [?]
Hai !
Come on!
Ai rabdare, pontu-i bun.
Have patience, the [?} is good
Hai !
Come on!
Aa, chiar acum.
Uhh, right know

Fa un pas in fata,
[Fa?] One foot forward
Da usor din coate
Give easily from the elbows [?]
Ca asa e-n viata
Cause it’s like that in life
Nu ramane-n spate.
Don’t lag behind
Misca-te la stanga,
Move to the left
Misca-te la dreapta,
Move to the right
Da usor din coate
[?]
Nu ramane-n spate.
Don’t lag behind
In fata, in spate, in stanga, in dreapta
In front, in back, to the left, to the right

Fa primul pas si ai sa vezi ca-i bine
[Again?] Your first foot and you’ll see that it’s ok
Totul e usor, reteta mea o prinzi din zbor.
Everything’s easy, you take my recipe from flight [?]
Viata nu e grea daca o traiesti asa
Life isn’t hard if you live it like this
Nu e prea greu de faci ca mine
It’s not too hard to do it like me [?]
O sa-ti mearga bïne.
It’s gonna go fine for you

Here you are:

Originally Posted by JunjouLover

Imi place atat (de mult) cantecul acesta. ^_^ Traducerea mea ati putea s-o corectati?

Asculta-ma si am sa-ti spun povestea
Listen to me and I will tell you the story
Ca sa stii si tu, am sa-ti dau reteta mea
So that you too know, I’m gonna give you my recipe
Iti zic eu cum sta treaba :
I tell you how things stand
Sa nu traiesti degeaba nu e prea greu
So that you don’t live in vain, it’s not too hard
De o sa faci ca mine o sa-ti mearga bine.
If you do the way I do, It’s gonna go fine for you.


Cum ?
How?
Stai ca-ti spun (stai ca-ti spun), stai
You stay so I tell you (you stay so I tell), stay
Hai !
Come on!
Ai rabdare, pontu-i bun.
Have patience, the tip is good
Hai !
Come on!
Aa, chiar acum.
Uhh, right know

Fa un pas in fata,
Take one step forward
Da usor din coate
Give easily from the elbows (in order to make space for oneself)
Ca asa e-n viata
Cause it’s like that in life
Nu ramane-n spate.
Don’t lag behind
Misca-te la stanga,
Move to the left
Misca-te la dreapta,
Move to the right
Da usor din coate
Give easily from the elbows
Nu ramane-n spate.
Don’t lag behind
In fata, in spate, in stanga, in dreapta
In front, in back, to the left, to the right

Fa primul pas si ai sa vezi ca-i bine
Make your first step and you’ll see that it’s ok
Totul e usor, reteta mea o prinzi din zbor.
Everything’s easy, you understand my recipe very fast
Viata nu e grea daca o traiesti asa
Life isn’t hard if you live it like this
Nu e prea greu de faci ca mine
It’s not too hard to do it like me
O sa-ti mearga bïne.
It’s gonna go fine for you

Multumesc frumoasa!