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Thread: Under the Old Oak Tree (Feedback Please) (0 Replies, 1,287 Views) by Daniel Terragar
Our childhood seemed to vanish in the haze
Our life is turning into a complex maze
After all we’ve been through and all we’ve done
Will you remember where we spent it all?
For most of our...
Thread: Kill the Silence.(Opinions wanted) (3 Replies, 1,326 Views) by Daniel Terragar
Well im glad your taking your time with it instead of writing a bridge thats clutterd everywhere (thought-wise). A really good bridge will make the song a lot stronger.
Thread: You will be missed (Feedback please) (1 Replies, 2,669 Views) by Daniel Terragar
thanks! :D anything in particular?
Thread: You will be missed (Feedback please) (1 Replies, 2,669 Views) by Daniel Terragar
I see you everyday
On every one of my picture frames
Yesterdays done I understand
You’ve moved on to the Promised Land
I know you don’t move or breathe
But it’s you that I need to see
I wish...
Thread: A Retard of Some Sort (2 Replies, 1,101 Views) by Daniel Terragar
Any Suggestions for the chorus? To me the chorus really emphasis's the fact that the person in the song is always at a loss for words when trying to interact with the person he finds intrest in....
Thread: Untitled at the moment.. (3 Replies, 1,337 Views) by Daniel Terragar
Good song. Maybe call it "Moving On" or "Leave You Behind". I liked it.
Thread: is it hard 2 learn guitar? (25 Replies, 50,389 Views) by Daniel Terragar
As long as you practice daily, and enjoy it you should be fine.
Thread: Kill the Silence.(Opinions wanted) (3 Replies, 1,326 Views) by Daniel Terragar
I think it should be a little bit longer. Try expanding on the verse's you have right now, and maybe add a verse for after the Bridge. Even write lyrics for the Bridge if you wanted to.
Overall,...
Thread: A Retard of Some Sort (2 Replies, 1,101 Views) by Daniel Terragar
I walk up to you
Just to pass you by
You look at me
And I give a sigh
You ask me a question
And I brush it off
You wonder if I lack attention
Am I a Retard of some sort?
Who can’t be social?