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Thread: Daises - Even If You Don't Comment On Any Other One Today, PLEASE Comment This! (5 Replies, 3,474 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Thanks. It was actually because I am planing to try and make it for my friend. I'll read your ones in bit. I've got food on the way atm. Mmm... Baked Potato :P
Thread: Daises - Even If You Don't Comment On Any Other One Today, PLEASE Comment This! (5 Replies, 3,474 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Daisies
I have a rule that I stick by,
Whether you like it or not,
I’m the one, who picks up the pieces,
That you drop.
Irony wins as I write this song,
The type of song I hate to write,...
Thread: We Reach The End (0 Replies, 1,374 Views) by Rabbitdrive
We Reach The End
I’ve always been honest,
And my songs reflect that,
The time is coming though,
Where my words will,
Have been for nothing,
But what do I know?
And just because I don’t...
Thread: In The End (0 Replies, 1,117 Views) by Rabbitdrive
In The End
Welcome to this expansive wasteland,
Welcome to where you auta be,
Welcome to the new found heart of Gold,
Welcome back to me…
Grab a pen and grab some paper,
Thread: Irony For The Win (0 Replies, 846 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Irony For The Win
[SPEAKING]
It doesn’t matter if you’re thin or tall,
It doesn’t matter if you’re fat or small,
Beauty is a perception - that is all,
Now can you hear the Irony call?
Eat...
Thread: Song Contest Extravaganza (10 Replies, 1,892 Views) by Rabbitdrive
I'm about to post one up here. You can use that if you so wish.
Thread: Better Song Lyrics Competition :P (16 Replies, 4,706 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Okay, 'tis over
Thread: Can someone help me? (6 Replies, 1,909 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Okay, are we talking pop-rock like scouting for girls or like the feeling. (Up-beat or down-beat?)
I'll have a guess though.
Thread: Better Song Lyrics Competition :P (16 Replies, 4,706 Views) by Rabbitdrive
I think that can count as 'in'. We're short on people anyway.
2 DAYS LEFT PEOPLE!!!
Thread: Song Contest Extravaganza (10 Replies, 1,892 Views) by Rabbitdrive
okies. You can count on me and my big ego. :P
Thread: Song Lyrics Competition (14 Replies, 6,739 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Well?
Thread: Better Song Lyrics Competition :P (16 Replies, 4,706 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Ladies and gentlemen, only 12 days left to go... (I think) Get in with your songs quickly.[/bump]
Thread: Summer Time Again (5 Replies, 2,382 Views) by Rabbitdrive
No, you reeeaaally wouldn't...
Thread: I can only Dream: PLEASE REVIEW (6 Replies, 1,269 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Enticing. :)
I like it.
Thread: Better Song Lyrics Competition :P (16 Replies, 4,706 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Mine > Yours :P
You don't have to keep thanking me. :D
Thread: Better Song Lyrics Competition :P (16 Replies, 4,706 Views) by Rabbitdrive
not yours; acheramee
Thread: Better Song Lyrics Competition :P (16 Replies, 4,706 Views) by Rabbitdrive
it does not matter as long as it have some relevance to her being in a coma.
Yeah, people are allowed to comment, but no editing on the 30th please, and where did yours go?
Thread: Better Song Lyrics Competition :P (16 Replies, 4,706 Views) by Rabbitdrive
It's not up to me... It's up to the public to decide. *dodedededededededededeee* :P
All good, but you spelt staring wrong. (I'm not having a go, I'm just saying)
Thread: The lyric game (35 Replies, 7,179 Views) by Rabbitdrive
If you already have one then I'm sorry, but I 've had a quick scan and cannae find one.
SO...
The idea is you write an excerpt of some lyrics and the following people have to guess what the song...
Thread: Fall Out Boy (21 Replies, 6,116 Views) by Rabbitdrive
I lurve Bang The Doldrums!
Thread: Episode (3 Replies, 1,365 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Woah!
I lub you. :P
Inspired and inspiring. Fabulous use of vocabulary.
Thread: Better Song Lyrics Competition :P (16 Replies, 4,706 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Before anyone gets touchy, I'm joking. XP
Basically, I have been looking on here every day and sometimes there are new songs, but most times it's just me. :P So, when I saw Night123's competition...
Thread: Tomorrow's Sorrow - Opinions (7 Replies, 3,678 Views) by Rabbitdrive
As' okay
Thread: Halloween on christmas :D (3 Replies, 2,379 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Um... not the songs I'm used to reading. It's... interesting. :P
Thread: Song Lyrics Competition (14 Replies, 6,739 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Im "going" to enter... um... :P
Thread: Modern Dracula (1 Replies, 1,796 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Wow. awesome wordism again. :)
Thread: The Joker (Not related to batman......) (1 Replies, 2,664 Views) by Rabbitdrive
I like the wording, but I think it needs some sort of chorus or something that stands out.
Also, can you give me the chord structure in retard speak? :P
Thread: Fond Farewell (1 Replies, 1,245 Views) by Rabbitdrive
I like it, but I'm interested is it supposed to be slow or energetic?
Thread: Ditches (0 Replies, 1,187 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Ditches
Some say I’m talented but I don’t believe them,
But I’d be lying if I said I didn’t want to be dragged into the limelight,
I just want to get there of my own accord,
I’d also be lying...
Thread: Heavan has Angelic Choirs, Hell has Cataphonic Choruses (0 Replies, 1,893 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Heaven Has Angelic Choirs, Hell Has Cataphonic Choruses
Tyrannical hordes,
Of constant concords,
The noise and sound,
Vocabulary bound,
Diabolical deeds,
Intercepting the relative needs,
The...
Thread: Necromantic Fools (2 Replies, 1,463 Views) by Rabbitdrive
I don't like following the herd of love songs, so I tend to write about the things other lyricists wouldn't dream about writting.
Thread: Tomorrow's Sorrow - Opinions (7 Replies, 3,678 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Slower with slight twinges of energy, especially at the 'Tommorows sorrow' bit near the end to then slow right down for the last couple of bars.
Thread: I will never forget you. opinions (2 Replies, 3,146 Views) by Rabbitdrive
That's really nice. I like it. I would like to criticise but I can only really comment because your songs don't need to be criticised.
Thread: Necromantic Fools (2 Replies, 1,463 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Necromantic Fools
To all those who know the dead they fancy,
Well I've taken up the art of necromancy,
A simple spell and the dead are raised,
Cross my palm with silver and you will be praised,...
Thread: what you think? be honest and give advice if any is had (3 Replies, 1,181 Views) by Rabbitdrive
I like it all but the "freestyle" It may just be me, but maybe if you used the more cinematographic method of talking over the music instead.
Thread: Can Someone help me with a title? (3 Replies, 1,142 Views) by Rabbitdrive
"Alight" maybe? I like the song. The oh oh ooooooooh, yea yea yea, mmm mmm bit at the top made me lol. :P
Thread: CAn you help me with a title? (21 Replies, 4,874 Views) by Rabbitdrive
'Motion Sickness' - It ties in with your chorus. (Which I really quite like)
Thread: Tomorrow's Sorrow - Opinions (7 Replies, 3,678 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Wow. I could imagine singing that, Great Imagery. Good work! :)
Thread: Pictures (2 Replies, 2,404 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Thank you. Not one of my best though.
Thread: Can someone help me? (4 Replies, 1,352 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Watch The World Collapse
We all know the story,
Of Romeo and Juliet,
A love that wasn't meant to be,
They were Montehues and Capulets,
But forbidden love,
Is a tasty, tasty, tasty fruit,
And...
Thread: Lonely (1 Replies, 1,875 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Hmm...
It's okay. I suppose it does go with the title albeit very cliché. I like your word usage. Keep it up.
Thread: Can someone help? (4 Replies, 1,304 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Tank oo'
Thread: Can someone help? (4 Replies, 1,304 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Are You Still Drowning in Cocktails and Drugs?
The fluorescent lights and the disco beat,
You were dancing; I was twitching my feet,
I've known you for what seems centuries,
But I just seem to...
Thread: Dedicated to: My Lovely Love That I Love 'til Love Loves Life (0 Replies, 3,943 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Dedicated to: My Lovely Love That I Love 'til Love Loves Life
I think I'll write and sing an unrequited love song,
Well, everybody else is jumping on the bandwagon,
I'll steal the music from a...
Thread: Can someone help? (4 Replies, 1,304 Views) by Rabbitdrive
I'll have a good go. :)
Thread: Can someone help me? (4 Replies, 1,352 Views) by Rabbitdrive
I will do that!
Thread: the beginning of a new song...(PLEASE COMMENT; IT'S MY FIRST) (1 Replies, 1,242 Views) by Rabbitdrive
"Take me back to the Paradise City"
Blatant Guns & Roses rip-off. :P
It's a nice start. WHat is the genre of the song?
Thread: start of a new one (1 Replies, 1,153 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Very repetitive. Is it supposed to be slow? If not or mediocre, then perhaps put an instrumental break in or another verse and you'll be getting there. :)
Thread: "Sum of Our Parts" (2 Replies, 1,555 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Personally, I think you can find a better melody. In the verses there are a lot of uses of the word "you" as what is essentially the rhyming word that puts the song together, and it's become some...
Thread: "Rap" Lyrics That I Wrote Bored (6 Replies, 8,435 Views) by Rabbitdrive
Not one for rap.
In fact I'd go as far as saying I hate it, so I don't know much about it, but I think it is actually a lot simpler than that, just same length sentences and a rhyme on the end. I...